Alas, the Divine Lord Is Too Irresistible

The article is overall good. I have seen the latest chapter and would like to share my own opinion (the following is only my personal opinion) The introduction at the beginning feels a bit lacking. It would be better if some periods could be changed to exclamation points. The editor may ask you to make changes in the future, so you can ignore this now🌚 The female protagonist was very strong in her previous life, she was also very good at alchemy and martial arts, she was ruthless and not procrastinating, and she teamed up with the male protagonist, which I loved to see. The emotional line is from the past life to the present. The gods, demons, and monsters all like the heroine, and then the vicious female supporting character kills the heroine in her previous life and still wants to be with the hero. Why do I love the Demon Lord more than the God Lord? Sure enough, the moon comes first when you are near the water. This demon king is quite interesting, and he feels like he will be destroyed if he doesn't get it, but he is also quite pitiful, and our heroine will not remember him. And that Li Shuang love brain, 🌚The male protagonist should quickly break up with the Li family, the dignified god actually lives under someone else's roof. You wrote the emotional line more clearly than I did. The male protagonist didn't appear twice in my hundred chapters. He was a complete worker and made me laugh to death. I am a person who likes to find shortcomings🌚Let me talk about some things that I think are not good enough. I won't make any comments at the beginning of the article. The protective grandfather, the ferocious father, the vicious concubine, and the family competition are already standard. Some parts of the logic are not particularly rigorous, such as the passage where the heroine crosses the city wall and the wall guards complain. Shouldn't the guards be more vigilant? But after seeing the back, I no longer care about the previous ones 😂 You still have to pay attention to some small details. The heroine's fighting power is a bit fierce at the beginning, unlike most heroines, she is not easily injured, but I kind of hope that she can get injured occasionally, pretend to be weak, and then give the male protagonist a chance to perform. To be honest, I didn't know the male protagonist's name at first (the illiterate cried), but later I looked it up and found out that his name was sheng, and also mao, the bloody person. If such a rare word appears in the future, can I add a pinyin for it🌸 The male protagonist basically appears and leaves as soon as he appears. It seems like he just goes through the motions, sprinkles some sugar and then says goodbye. As for the Feiyunmen part and the rest, it's okay. There must always be a plot to gradually warm up the relationship between the two, rather than leaving after the flirtation. And most of the time the male protagonist appears, he is flirting with the female protagonist😂 (It turns out that these plots can pass the review, I understand.) I feel that adding a thank you to a certain gold coin at the end of the chapter will affect the smoothness of the writing and is not necessary. If you're used to it, just pretend I didn't say it🌚👍 The article is generally good, focusing on the emotional line, but the plot needs a little more novelty. After reading some chapter reviews, I found a lot of cameos from readers. The tweets were so enthusiastic that before the article became popular, I took the tweets from the front row🌸🌸🌸

Wow, I really like your books. I especially like books about strong women. It's super cool. I read it. I just read it once. I read it without knowing it because it was so fun. I hope you can read more. Please.

I like books written by great authors, especially this one. This book is very beautiful. Personally, I like to be sweet and pampered, not too sadistic, and the heroine should be strong. This book is different from anything I've ever read. This book is probably my favorite e-book for now! O(∩_∩)O

There are too many emotional scenes, and every chapter is about kissing. I still like the kind where the female protagonist fights monsters, the male protagonist assists, and there is a happy reunion in the later stage.

It's really good-looking. The heroine is domineering. I have the urge to snatch Xiao Xiyao from Junli.

Big cheers for the author! Like your book

Very nice

Updates are too slow. , One chapter is updated in one day, sometimes it takes two or three days to update one chapter.

The plot is smooth and the writing is brilliant. Can it be updated more?

Good looking♡