Arrogant

Let me comment for the time being: the levels are blurred, the time magic weapon is confusing, and sometimes the time compared with the outside world is wrong after the magic weapon is released. Another point is that no matter what the time proportion is, the age will still be lost in the magic weapon. It cannot remain unchanged and you will always be 20 years old when you come out. The shortcomings of fighting are that there is always a lot of nonsense before fighting, and it is very powerful to pretend to be B. There are some very retarded writing methods. After obtaining the magic weapon, instead of imprisoning or killing them inside the magic weapon, they released a bunch of heads of the four major families, and then immediately went out and were besieged by them. This must have been a retarded idea. It was written earlier that level upgrading is extremely difficult, but later there are piles and piles of them.

I read Chapter 1430 First Ziyun Road, realm, cheating and growth! Until Tianjun. The Nine-Star Heavenly Lord has begun to write ink. From the early to late stages of the sub-dominance, it is the peak, and it is even more unsightly. It has been emphasized many times that it is invincible under the domination. As for being able to fight against the domination, what? If you can't beat him, how many times will you toss back and forth to the peak of sub-dominance! (Pit: The inheritance at the beginning destroys the prophecy of the Lord, slows down the passage of time in Tianjun Mansion, assassinates the king's son in the big world, is a woman and has two lines to enter the harem, it is not worth it for Qingyi... Big Pit: In the sub-dominator realm, even the master can't defeat him. On the other side, the king of hundreds of gods chased him and ran away without even receiving his lunch box. He then killed him ruthlessly. The villains are all petty people. Jealousy begins... And they have no bearing. Huge Pit: The Gate of Epic Dominion, the Top Treasure. The protagonist Guanghuan has survived! This thing is not good. It exudes an epic and poetic atmosphere and attracts hatred.

Originally, it was okay when I first started watching it. Whether the protagonist was fighting or improving his cultivation, including the plot direction, it was just okay. The only bad thing was that the protagonist was a stallion. Then starting from the ascension to the upper world, the eight-star monarch of Cang Xuanting began to drag out the plot and make it watery. One thing can be explained clearly in one sentence, and it can be said repeatedly in different methods for about one or two chapters. It also analyzes the character's mind for several chapters. What is the use of this analysis? It is not that I can't understand it, and the analysis has little to do with the plot.

The more I write, the uglier it becomes. After a fight, I would scold it for a long time, and I would feel angry after reading it. Really ugly

It's really annoying to get obsessed with love after only a few chapters. There are so many brothers in the family and I can't protect any one of them. As long as I'm a woman, I can protect and pass the level. This is a romance novel, right? Why not practice well? Enthusiasm, gratitude, passionate unity, the kind of passion that fits the fantasy hour

I'm convinced, I really don't know what to say. The whole story is in Moji and then after the fight, I run here and fight the other. The key is still Moji. The villains are all small-minded, and she is a woman who entered the harem after two sentences... There is no technical content at all. A sub-dominator wanders back and forth several times. It is really another idiot after the "School Beauty" series.

What the hell happened to my sister?

Is it poisonous? Does the author often use the wrong name? I have only read a few chapters. The protagonist's eldest brother is called Cang Xuanfeng at one time, and Cang Xuanyin at another. The protagonist, the Stallion, is dating the second senior sister. He turns around and hugs the senior sister. Book friends hurriedly evacuate.

It has not been upgraded for eight thousand years, and even a pig can write a book.

Read 300 chapters. I can't stand it anymore!