The Female General Did Evil for Her Concubine

The length of the article is appropriate. The male and female protagonists are domineering but their methods are not ruthless enough, so the little guy jumps around to death. The male and female protagonists have a stable relationship. The male protagonist has no regrets. What a good man~ We all know that the female protagonist has a long voice and is the one whom the male protagonist loves deeply, but why is it necessary to always call her Feng Ge?

After reading it, I feel like I have read it but not seen it. The story is very big but seems to tell very little. I can't say what I feel after reading it. The heroine is reborn into her sister. In the later stage, the heroine goes to fight but there is no fighting on the battlefield. It should be classified as outsmarting. Anyway, after reading this book in a daze, I always feel that there is something wrong with it.

It's really beautiful! Feng Ge kills everyone!

Good luck! Good luck! Love it, love it! !

How should I put it? The author dug a lot of holes in the writing process, and then didn't want to fill them in. Many places were inexplicably left unfinished. A person suddenly appeared and disappeared suddenly, and the bamboo forest part disappeared inexplicably? How would Ruan Ye choose? Did he have any different intentions? Who was the traitor between them? The old man showed up just for the sake of showing up? What's next? There was a lot of foreshadowing and it ended inexplicably? What's the difference between this and a bad ending? I would like to sincerely give you a suggestion to the author. If you have a bad memory, please stop making so many foreshadowings, okay? , I have been reading Qimao for several years. I give up unsatisfactory novels and never comment on them. I want to read this novel, but the ending is really unbearable. Is it just like ending for the sake of ending? Nothing is explained. It is solved by saying that the past is over? I'm afraid you may have forgotten the previous content by the end of writing, right?

First of all, the plot: there were too many holes dug in the beginning, and filling them in later was very perfunctory... The characters of the male protagonist and the female protagonist are okay, but basically everyone knows about the heroine's rebirth, which is ridiculous, and then there is the paragraphing: while reading, it suddenly jumps to the next scene, that is, people and things are changed, just like a TV series. It's like this, and it's a TV series like Country Love. It keeps changing the camera to explain different people and things. Once it stops, you have to think about where the previous plot has gone. The palace fight part that follows is not very exciting, and the twist is not strong enough. The overall situation can only be regarded as average, but it is not difficult to watch.

It's a good book, but the ending doesn't explain the situation of some people clearly. The male and female protagonists are super good-looking! Not bloody! Three correct views! Lay down your life for the other person.

I just didn't see the ending of the princess and whether Jing Yu went to find her or not. Everything else was pretty good. I was satisfied with the ending.

Although the male and female protagonists are well designed, there are probably too many typos, wrong sentences, character surnames, and names. Since you are writing for readers, shouldn't you be more rigorous? I sincerely hope that the author will go back and see for himself and correct the mistakes.

Since there is a lot of foreshadowing ahead, don't think about hastily ending it, it feels like there is still more to learn.