My Disciples in Journey to the West Are All Great Saints

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Urgent update, hope to fight Buddhism later (ΦωΦ)

Can you please update Ma Liu quickly?

Emmm~ Σ( ° △ °|||) I really don't know what to do, the early stage is pretty good, the plot is rich and colorful, In the mid-term, Chang'e has some flaws, and she looks a little speechless. The later period is all about different paths leading to the same destination. At this point, it can almost be said that the book has come to an end, because it is boring and boring. The protagonist basically appears in the early stage, has few roads in the middle stage, and is completely invisible in the later stage. Then he suddenly becomes invincible, without saying anything, and just ends the game in a sideways push. To sum up, this is probably a behind-the-scenes article. Unfortunately, I don't know whether the author chose the wrong subject or the text is insufficient, which has led to the book going into the abyss step by step. It is a helpless move to end the story! Recommendation index: ★★★★☆ (A book without a heroine behind the scenes has many flaws, but the book is worth reading!)

Very nice

Chapter 40: Abandoned Book, I don't know where this 8:09 mark comes from. Are there too many sailors? Please comment a little bit. First of all, what is the description of the third apprentice of the protagonist? The eldest apprentice Sun Wukong and the second apprentice Li Zhi, these two are okay, they are self-aware, respect their teachers, and do things that are not out of the ordinary. What about the third apprentice, a woman, the princess of the daughter country, who can act crazy just because she is a woman? The protagonist said everything would be easy, but on the first day on the mountain, this female apprentice took advantage of her daughter to act rogue? Don't you listen to the warning? Can you ignore the two great immortals? She is just a mortal, so she is not worried at all? On the first day when we went up the mountain, there was a monkey with a sharp mouth and monkey cheeks. In the eyes of mortals, Wukong was a monster. What kind of thing was this female disciple? She was forced to be smart and fearless? Forced to cheat? Forcibly arrogant? This is a complete failure. On this point, this book is not even rated at 8:05, and there are other demerits. The second demerit is the writing style. The first ten or twenty chapters are barely written. Although it is not beautiful, it is indeed readable. In the thirty or so chapters, after the people of the Dragon Clan obtained magical powers from the sacred trees, the style of painting changed, and it was like a different author. It was originally a diary of a high school graduate, but suddenly it became an elementary school student writing an essay, which was very abrupt. , When the Dragon King went to heaven to ask for other volumes of the sacred tree, he clearly said that I wanted other volumes of the sacred tree. What conditions can you put forward, but the result is that Nezha thought it was given away for free, and he said, wait, the sacred tree is not given to you for free, we have conditions. Although it is not the original text, it means exactly the same. Others have already asked you to put forward conditions, and you still say, "I won't give it away for free, I want conditions?" ? ? Damn, this writing is amazing, just like in reality, Party B says to Party A, you sign this contract, I will give you benefits, Party A says, wait, the contract is not in vain, I want benefits, isn't this a contradiction? So, will Party B give this benefit? Third, it's logic. When the protagonist in the article was educating his apprentices, he said that the second apprentice's skills were so good that he would practice faster than the first apprentice. As a result, when the first apprentice became a Daluo, it only took him ten or twenty years, and the second apprentice only took more than thirty years to become Taiyi? Did the author forget what he wrote? Let's just talk about these three points. After all, we have just read Chapter 40, and there are already these problems in the content of Chapter 40. No matter how the subsequent writing is, can this book reach 8.9? 7:05 At most, okay. The writing is not good, the logic is illogical, and the characters are broken. There will probably be a protagonist with attributes of the Holy Mother in the future, because with the appearance of this third apprentice, it will be unreasonable for the protagonist not to be the Holy Mother. Moreover, the third apprentice will be like this, later on If there are a few more female apprentices, will they kill the other brothers on the first day of their apprenticeship? If they can't kill them, they will ask the protagonist for help. Say, Master, help me kill all the brothers. I want them to be destroyed. If you don't help me, you are not a human being? ? Damn it. That's it, overall score, seven points, recommendation index, two stars

The plot has no logic

Marvelous! ! ! ! ! !

So well written

Wonderful