Time Tycoon

Alas, after reading more than sixty chapters, I can't stand it anymore, so I'm giving up reading! Do junior high school students write essays? The female protagonist is silly and sweet, while the male protagonist, apart from knowing the future, has a weak emotional intelligence! Opponents are all stupid! No depth, no structure, just a show-off. Nothing!

They are all worth billions and don't know how to dress. Every time I was slapped in the face by a security guard, I accepted it. Also, that brother-in-law can change his face faster than he can flip through a book, and will leave if he doesn't borrow money. Isn't this kind of person a white-eyed wolf? After reading 200 chapters, I was successfully persuaded to quit.

The plot is okay! It's just that sometimes what I write is too taken for granted! Do you think that a billionaire boss or a reborn person with some ability to predict will not know the importance of a bodyguard team? Is it realistic to not have a group despite multiple accidents?

Very nice

Come on,

Can the male protagonist be worth more than 10 billion and not be able to hire a bodyguard? You are always in danger, why would you start a fight with yourself? Either something happens to a family member or something happens to a friend! The author himself forgot to give the male protagonist a bodyguard!

I don't know how you came up with it. When you meet an opponent, you use gangster methods, and then the male protagonist kneels down and licks you? Nausea! ! ! He's worth tens of billions and can't even afford a bodyguard NB

I have been writing about stocks, and suddenly a sentence came up that stocks will explode, and I was too lazy to read!

It's rubbish. Even in the end, not a single enemy was killed. Why is the protagonist's heart so big? Tang Monk should be reincarnated. All enemies can be forgiven.

Lack of basic common sense