One Sword for Eternity

To be honest, overall it looks good, but it always looks so stubborn and makes me feel uncomfortable looking at it.

Cool article

It's just too little and not enough to see.

There are too many typos. There are dozens of typos in one chapter. I don't know how this kid wrote a book.

There is a chapter where the protagonist is Su Yu, and then Ye Fei is written about. I don't understand it. Is Ye Fei a guest star?

Every time there is someone you can't beat, you don't use your trump cards. You just show off your strength. Then all your friends are killed by the enemy. You don't use your trump cards. You just become incompetent and furious.

High energy throughout

All right!

There are too many typos,

Worthy of praise