A Collection of Folk Feng Shui Records

This book is really good. The only flaw is the protagonist's emotional line and some pitfalls that the author forgot to fill in. For example, the little girl he accepted as an outer disciple has not appeared since that chapter.

Overall, it's pretty good. It just needs to refine the details during the narrative process, such as some scenes and characters. The writer's responsibility is to be loyal to the people and the motherland, and to reflect the lives and struggles of the people at the bottom in the most authentic way through the people and things they have personally experienced. The author of this article did it! He brought us to a different world of traditional Chinese culture, which is magnificent... Of course, any work has shortcomings, as long as the mainstream is good! I thought it was very interesting at first, but then I really couldn't stand it anymore. The author succeeded in making the female protagonist a very annoying character. She is always jealous and complaining, which is not lovable at all. The male protagonist also became very wordy. I felt like I was trying to make up for the word count. I can write a lot of words with just one mental picture. There are also a lot of female supporting characters. The more I read, the more boring it becomes. 🌚

I didn't want to complain at first, but the more I read, the more disgusting I became. The male protagonist is a holy mother who bursts into tears at every turn. The female protagonist is even worse. She is jealous of girls who are nice to the male protagonist. She wants to kill the male protagonist and is a good sister. Etc. To put it simply, throughout the whole story, I can only see it as rubbish!!!

It's good to watch. The early relationship between the male protagonist is a bit worrying. After the misunderstanding is resolved, he becomes very affectionate.

Isn't it interesting to spend more time with a pervert? You can meet beautiful women just by setting off. Can they still like each other? I have lost my mentality at all. A good Feng Shui master will let you write like this

Brothers and sisters, can you grant me a small wish? Please give me an even number of likes.

…"Drive" when you see it halfway

There are too many emotional scenes in a novel about supernatural events. Basically, the male protagonist is attracted to a woman and knows that he is a married man, which is of no use. He is basically brainless. Knowing that the female patrol shop wanted to learn Feng Shui to break up with him, she actually felt distressed! Still uncomfortable! Please, you have a wife! Can your three views be more normal?

Disgusting character. The man is always crying and has no concept of love. He knows that Wang Yue is a single beauty and knows that she is already married, but he still has sex with her. He can't bear to have an affair with Wang Yue and covets Wang Yue's whiteness. If Wang Yue stopped thinking about Huahua's body and beauty, the male protagonist would have completely betrayed Shiyu, and the main reason why the male protagonist saved Shiyu was driven by the jade pendant, not because he actively wanted to save the female protagonist. If there was no jade pendant to restrain the male protagonist, he would have cheated on him long ago. What a disgusting scumbag.

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