999 Times Training System

The next 400 chapters are really unreadable. Repeating the previous routines, upgrading and killing monsters... I feel sick after reading them~ Is the author out of inspiration? There is something wrong with the entire framework... I thought it was pretty good at the beginning, but you don't need to read it later...

999 Times? You know what the concept of 999 times is. You practice for one day while others practice for more than two years. Upgrading in the early stage was too slow. It took you seven days to reach level seven. It took more than two years to be someone else in one day, but it took you seven days to reach level seven? I'm not even as high as the second lady. What do you think your 999 system is for?

A good book! But why is it not popular?

The beginning of this book is okay and I can still understand it. The Jiang sisters disappeared from the beginning after more than 620 chapters, and the system was directly written out by the author. They often jump from one place to another. It feels like two novels before and after chapter 600. The protagonist in the front is more smart, evil and realistic, but in the back I feel that he has suddenly changed to the Long Aotian route. In chapter 628, a slaying temple suddenly appeared, and a new word suddenly appeared without filling in many pitfalls. It is really a long time to see.

? Outrageous

Let's talk about the advantages first. According to the system text, the protagonist is good. No more. Let's talk about the shortcomings. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. I was very embarrassed when I watched it. I also don't want to meet all kinds of beauties all the time. I'm really convinced. Apart from the system, the only thing in my eyes is women, right?

This is the first novel I read in Qimao. In fact, the plot of this novel is quite exciting at the beginning. The author's writing is not bad, but it becomes a bit bad at the end. Mr. Lu Xun said (I never said it) that if a book has a good plot but poor writing, it is a bad book, because no matter how good the plot is, it is a bad book. Without writing, nothing can be reflected, just like a machine that knows everything but has no emotions. If a book has a cliched plot but good writing, then this book can be considered the best, because even a poor plot can be vividly expressed, allowing readers to imagine the scene and immersing them in it. If the author has other works that he wants to write, please try to improve his writing skills.

Well written

There are serious problems with the division of realms, there are serious problems with gaining experience, there are serious problems with the realms of various messy areas in the southeast, northwest, and middle areas, there are serious skipping problems in the content and plot, and there is an inexplicable loss problem of sects or characters. No matter where the male protagonist goes, there will be a serious incestuous stallion problem like a certain male protagonist pretending to be B (which is equivalent to changing the place and changing the character name). The male protagonist just needs to be a female. There is a problem with too much nonsense. I feel that the characters in the novel are completely superimposed with repeated characters (in summary, in fact, no one can beat the male protagonist, as long as the opponent has some brains, he can easily beat the male protagonist, and the enemies the male protagonist encounters are all mentally retarded)

Wonderful! Highlight Ji You's unparalleled sentence nature.