Treasure Hunt

The writing was good at the beginning, but then it was made up and messed up.

Everything else is fine, except that the protagonist has some brain problems and lives a miserable life. He has good things, but he doesn't sell things to pay off his debts when he has no money. He's always thinking about things.

Very well written. There are some typos in the article that you need to pay attention to. Please keep writing and look forward to watching.

I have read more than a hundred chapters, and what I want to do in the first chapter has no plan at all. Instead, it just becomes a new addition to the dog. It's disgusting.

There is no beginning or end. When I see the table of contents below 451, I can't see it, so I say the book is finished. There are more than a thousand tables of contents, but I have read less than a quarter of it. Really bad.

The plot is too confusing. The author can make the male protagonist look like a fool. I really can't stand it anymore. I can't even open my mouth to say something good!

I feel like the protagonist is the most incompetent time traveler

It is so easy to express emotions, anger, sorrow and joy on your face, yet you are still reborn, what big things can you do, and every time you swear in your heart to do big things, what kind of revenge can you take, are you trying to enlighten the readers?

There is a bit of plot in the front, but it uses game currency, and the back is so messed up that I don't know what to write.

Dross