Supreme God and Demon

So beautiful, thank you

The first picture didn't have the momentum of killing people. It looked unpleasant and felt a little painful. However, the author responded to almost every comment. For this reason, I give it a good review.

"Wha, what? There is actually a third-grade student who dares to challenge a sixth-grade student. You must know that there is a junior high school that is the closest to sixth-grade students, and the difference between each grade in elementary school is more than one and a half points. There is actually a third-grade student who dares to challenge a sixth-grade student. Doesn't he want to live?" In the only elementary school in Li Village, two students, one large and one small, were confronting each other. They were each guarding their desks, and powerful auras emanated from them. I saw the student Gao standing with his hands behind his hands, showing disdain, and said in Mandarin, which was not loud but could be heard by everyone, "It's you, do you want to challenge me? I am in the sixth grade, you have to think about it." Everyone onlookers marveled at his Mandarin. You know, Mandarin is not that easy to speak, but his Mandarin was so standard that even the sixth-grade teacher's Mandarin level was just like this. But the younger student was not afraid at all and used the same standard, even with English Mandarin mixed in. "Nice, so what?" This sentence in English shocked the whole audience. There was actually someone who could mix English with Mandarin without any sense of inconsistency. No one in the entire Li Village had such strength. This kid had such strength at such a young age. How could he do it when he grows up? I'm afraid even the village chief wants to win over him. Moreover, when this child grows up, he may threaten the Murong family, the only high school student in the village. Although he was shocked by this sentence in English, the older student still pretended to be calm, thinking that he was a sixth-grade student and could master Pinyin proficiently, but English was really his weakness. He heard that students in the town, even if they were only in the first grade, could also speak two sentences in English. "Nothing." He sneered. The people who supported the sixth graders opened their eyes wide, "Idioms, idioms, he can actually use idioms of this level, and in the correct context." "The sixth grade is worthy of the sixth grade, and the light of fireflies dares to compete with the bright moon. I am afraid that these juniors in the third grade will be lost here today." "I wanted to win over him, but unfortunately I lost a good prospect. I thought when he grew up, he could represent the school in the county competition..." Everyone looked at the person who said this, it was the repeater who had been in the sixth grade of elementary school for eight years!! I heard that this repeater has been stuck in the sixth grade for eight years and has never made a breakthrough. Although his grades are poor, he is extremely knowledgeable about various subjects. Teachers have to rely on him to solve some problems. He actually made such a comment about this third grade student. Looking at this third-grade student, he is neither arrogant nor impetuous, and the expression on his face is very calm, as if the words of the crowd are not talking about him. He sneered and said, "What are you waiting for? Let's compete. Don't waste time. It's lunch break now and I have an English class in the afternoon." "English class!" "The sixth grader exclaimed, "Today is Friday, there are no classes in the afternoon? " "It's you who don't have classes. I have to take extra math lessons tomorrow." He said calmly. Cold sweat began to break out on the sixth grader's head. He didn't expect this boy to be so powerful. I'm afraid his background was not simple. But when he thought about it, he was just a third grader. What should he be afraid of? As long as he played tricks during the competition, he would definitely be harmed. What kind of genius is nothing more than a joke if he doesn't grow up. The sixth grader forced himself to calm down and said, "Okay, I won't bully you either. What do you want to compare to?" "English." "English? Is this kid crazy? No matter how much tutoring he does after class, he is only a third grader. The sixth grader has studied English for two and a half years." The student who has been in the sixth grade for eight years sighed and said, "This kid has good talent, but he is too rampant. It is an unnatural act to challenge a higher grade, and he actually challenges English." "Go and call the teacher quickly." Someone said in a low voice. The third grader said to the sixth grader, "What's the point of just competing? But let's bet something." "Just bet, what are you betting on?" "An English dictionary." "He actually has the legendary English dictionary!" Everyone couldn't help but look at the third grader with hot eyes, and even the sixth grader's nemesis offered him an olive branch, but the third grader just smiled and said nothing. "Well, let's get started, remember to have your English dictionary ready." There was a cold glint in the sixth grader's eyes. The third grader was not in a hurry at this time and continued, "Since I want to bet, I will use this English dictionary to bet, what will you use to stop me?" "Are the vernacular versions of "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms" and "Water Margin" enough?" The sixth grader was very confident, so he showed his trump card. He bought these two books at a dilapidated bookstall. Although he read them every day, he still didn't understand the meaning of them, but at first glance they were high-grade books. Although the third-year smile annoyed him, the game began. The sixth grader took the lead, "What did Apple say?" "Apple." "Banana." "Banana" After a battle, both of them were injured. The third grader held on to the table and finally launched an offensive. "How do you say watermelon in English?" The sixth grader was panicking, watermelon. When he was learning this word, he took leave to go to the toilet, so he didn't learn it. How did he know? The sixth grader collapsed on the ground, as if all his strength had been drained, and the third grader continued to attack violently. "Are you okay?" The sixth grader was completely defeated, but he took advantage of the third grader's turn and launched an attack on the third grader when no one was paying attention. "Shit." But was easily dodged by the third grader. When he looked around, he realized that the people around him were looking at him with horrified eyes. He hurriedly defended, saying, "I'm not, I didn't, please listen to my explanation. "Stop talking about it, you actually practice magic privately!

I have read more than a hundred chapters now, and the overall feeling is that the plot is the same, with a change of flavor; the male protagonist never has the feeling of a lion fighting a rabbit with all his strength when fighting life and death, and always takes action passively; the male protagonist is burdened with a heavy secret but does not know how to protect it, and still exposes it to outsiders. How much does the male protagonist think? The two people around me who have lived for millions of years have lived in vain! The male protagonist inquires about his life experience, and the surname Tantai is so rare, but there is a person with the surname Tantai nearby. Why don't you ask, and why do you go far away to find some secret guard to investigate? Your head is filled with water, or you are squeezed by the door, or it is muddy... In addition to "Nine Transformations", the names of those martial arts are "Nine Heavens", or one of the major meridian-suppressing skills of a certain lineage. It gives me the feeling that the author is trying to make up for the word count. However, the male protagonist has a few things that are very good: he must retaliate, he never shows mercy, he leaves no consequences, he knows how to advance and retreat, and he knows how to act according to his ability.

Well written and flawless

Nice

The writing is good, especially the writing style in the following chapters. Some of the first parts are similar to the plots of the novels written by the author before. I hope the author can be more innovative in the future. If the fighting scenes are the kind of peak showdowns, I hope the author will not write them as soon as they are duel. At five or six chapters, I feel that it would be a bit boring to write so many chapters about fighting; I also found that there are quite a lot of compound surnames used in the characters' names in the works written by the author. You can use some rare surnames like Beiming, Wenren, and Duanmu; finally, I hope the author can write more and more exciting stories to attract more readers.

Nine Heavens Destroying God Art, followed by twelve serious scriptures and so on, are written every time. This paragraph is embarrassing and uncomfortable. It is too repetitive, so I can simplify it.

It's a brainless article with very confusing logic, and it doesn't look good. 😔

It looks great, but can you update it quickly?