Sweet Love in the Eighties: The Plump Wife's Comeback

You can't make up the word count like this. I understand that you wrote about how to cook in the first part. Maybe this is your writing style, but don't you think it's too much in the second part? It's all chicken soup. What we want to see is the plot, not the chicken soup. An 8-year-old child likes his big brother? Don't you think it's very reasonable? For the sake of one person, you are indifferent to your biological father and brother. You have been mentioning three views throughout the novel. Are these your three views? The word count is too much. If you can't write it, you can just write the ending. You don't need so much chicken soup.

It looks great. I hope the author will update it as soon as possible😊

Expression 1 in the book

I can't stand it anymore, everyone around the heroine is divorced

I feel that this novel is very positive, the rebirth is rebellious, and the subject matter is very bad. But the author really writes it very well, so it can be considered that he has completely avoided this pitfall! It also contains some truths, which is why I particularly like this book.

The story is okay, but the author's rant-like memoir is still lacking. It takes a lot of effort to turn pages, but I'll tell you what it means to stop halfway.

It looks good in the front, but it doesn't work after the halfway point, so it's been abandoned.

I can't stop the car at the moment. It's wonderful and deeply rooted in people's hearts. The main point is real and relevant to people's hearts!

It started out well, but then it became a very bland narrative.

Nice