The Evil Swordsman Is in the City

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The plot has ups and downs, the plot is complete and has no interruptions, and it is very interesting to watch.

It's just a stallion story, from beginning to end...

To be honest, I think the most important thing about this type of book is the creation of the protagonist. Your book is very good except for being too scumbag. The other is the fighting, but your writing is too simple. You can't describe the heroism and difficulty of the protagonist's battle. You just brush it off in one stroke, which means that it's okay in the north. Let me talk about the most important point again. You can leave a few points without explanation at the end. You can let the readers guess on their own. You are too lazy. First of all, the Chenfeng couple have already said that people from the fairy world will come in the future. But you didn't mention it at all later. Let's just say Now that the plot has ended in Jinzhou, the protagonist is invincible, shouldn't it be written in depth, about the duel with the people in the fairy world, and also in Beijing, you didn't explain clearly what happened to the old man, so you just ended it here,? . ? It's a bit too much. To be honest, I came from Xiu Guo. You were really good in the early stage and had no faults. But in the later stage, were you too perfunctory? There are many other points I won't go into. You are also new to the book, I hope you will work harder in the future😊

I thought it was recommended by (Xiu Guo), it must be good-looking, but I didn't expect that after seeing dozens of pictures, I had sex with a lot of women. Is it cultivating immortality or cultivating a harem?

Nice

Very well written