The Little Sweetheart Is Spoiled Rotten with Her Pocket Dimension

No, it's all a repetitive good and bad review. I felt very good when I entered this book. I just hope that there are too many typos. God, I still need to imagine it myself. And to be honest, the writing style is true, not particularly good. You see, just one name can sum it up. It has to be written with two names. That kind of sentence is annoying and uncomfortable to read.

I hope the platform can put the book on the platform after reviewing it

There are so many typos, it's hard to watch, I have no patience, I can't stand it anymore

The plot is really good, but there are always typos. The name Mu Xiaoyue becomes Li Yue every time I write it. I also feel that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is a bit rushed. How can the male protagonist identify with the female protagonist so quickly?

To be honest, the name of the heroine is a big flaw. Then there are too many typos and a lot of missing words. Moreover, the heroine is selfish and timid. She is just as "little girl" as the title of the book. I suggest the author to read other authors' apocalyptic texts or check the information before writing...

Isn't it said that there is a ring in front of the heroine's space? Why did it turn into earrings after reading a few chapters? I have to correct the typos myself when reading the book. I have to understand the sentences myself or I don't understand the meaning. It's really hard to read.

I can spell the name of the main character wrong and I have nothing to say. But if you ignore it, it's still pretty cool.

Macabaka

Li Yue? Mu Xiaoyue? ?

The plot is good, but the writing is not good and there are many typos. I am exhausted from watching it.