Marshal Dragon Soul

It's so exciting. When will you update? Can't wait

One. Where is the daughter? Two. The front and back don't match. Three. Names of people and places can be changed at will. Four. The plot is a mess. There are too many more, so I won't go into them. It was originally written very well, but the more I read later, the more messy it becomes.

Well written

The reason is just stupid, and I don't want to let my family know anything.

Updates are too slow and there are too many typos

The writing is so bad, the preface does not match the follow-up, the story is completely confusing, and the plot is confusing.

Too many errors and inconsistencies

You'll die if you tell me your identity. Something happens every time.

The plot is disjointed. The female protagonist is like a retarded person with no ability to think. The male protagonist is a 250-year-old who always puts his relatives in trouble. He is like a gangster.

It was okay at first, but now the plot is confusing, the names are messed up, it's such a mess, it's the first time I've seen such a book published, it's a waste of my time