The Divine-Eyed Treasure Appraisal Expert

Very interesting. Come on, author!

Update soon, the author is great, it looks good

A work that makes me angrier the more I look at it! The protagonist must have a protagonist aura! Kill decisively! The character of the protagonist you wrote is too rubbish! Kill whoever deserves to be killed! Otherwise, readers' good mood will be gone! This is the first time I've read a book like this that can make me feel bad

The storyline mainly revolves around several women! The storyline is not great! Too much talking! Of course it's not down to earth! It gives readers the impression that people with superpowers are just perverts! In short, the more I look at it, the more boring it becomes! It seems that the author's thinking model needs to be improved!

Wonderful plot

The plot is rubbish, the plot is messy, the author doesn't know what to write, just rambles on, and just makes some gimmicks to cheat the text, bad review!

The plot is too confusing, the names of the characters are confusing, and the identities and backgrounds are also confusing😤The key is that it is too pornographic and not suitable for teenagers to watch

This man is so incompetent,

To the author, I hope to read it carefully. One thing to say, one thing makes me look bigger than the other. . . To be fair, it's a stallion story. But the entanglement between multiple girls and the male protagonist is a bit too confusing and childish. The suggestion is that we can clarify this part first. After clarifying the relationship between the characters, various events will become more logical. It's a mess now. . I've watched a third of the movie and still don't understand what the male protagonist's character is like. . . The characters of the girls described in the article are not very clear either. The breaking point of the incident conflict was actually very sudden. In order to promote the plot and character relationships, it is not recommended to create various unreasonable coincidences and events. Emotional relationship matters can be dealt with one by one, in a circular and gradual manner. Nowadays, multiple female characters appear in the same event or in multiple related events. As a viewer, I feel a little headache. As I write this, the relationship between one girl and one girl hasn't been settled yet, and then another one pops up. Layer by layer, I now see 6 female characters appearing, and none of them have been dealt with properly. Like a ball of paste. . There is no logic whatsoever. And. The character design of the female characters is a bit off. . Too childish. . . We can also put more effort into this aspect to at least make the characters look fuller. To give a simple example, the character from the Jade Girl Alliance is a bit too silly. Um. . The character of the male protagonist is also very young. . It is written in the article that the male protagonist feels that he cannot be like a dog licker, but what he does is actually a dog licker, and he is a big injustice. . . A bit too much nonsense. . To sum up, it is to polish the character settings, and then follow the relationship between the characters to develop different branch plots. It is recommended to do it one by one. Anyway, the whole book now is just one word, chaos. .

The protagonist is a lustful person, and the ones who come out are all beautiful women. No matter how he quarrels with the protagonist, the protagonist can bear it. Is this a dog licking?