Dahunjun

There are too many typos, be careful. Like, not easy, write a book.

Well, the main character is like a fool.

I think the protagonist can't even be an emperor. The emperor is a conspirator. The protagonist is good at everything and is still a virgin. At any rate, the emperor is angry and his corpses are everywhere. It's so rubbish. Those good reviews are either bought, or people who just started reading the book didn't understand anything and gave it good reviews. I don't know if the second part of this book is good or not, but the first part is enough to persuade me to leave. The historical-themed opening of Qin Shihuang is much better than this one. Most of the current novels are still anticlimactic. You are just starting to end, and you still want people to insist on seeing the end. I have been thinking about it for a long time before giving this bad review. Don't say anything in the comment area that you like to read, and don't be a holy mother. Seven Cats has a comment area for people to comment. Okay, that's it.

Very different life

There are a lot of typos, and it also jumps out of the plot. The protagonist is sometimes strong and sometimes weak. The security of the palace is so poor that it is easy to assassinate anyone. The thoughts and actions of the Third Prince and the Sixth Prince gave people the impression that they were like mentally retarded children, but their excuses for doing wrong things were so "powerful" that the group of followers believed them. Overall, I felt dizzy after reading this book.

It looks good at first, but what's behind it? Forget about typos, even the names of the characters can be confused. One moment Ruyi is the princess or the younger sister, and the next moment it becomes Yu Qing, the princess or the younger sister? Then there are the subsequent plots, many of which are inconsistent with each other. The previous chapter was still writing about this matter, and it was only half of the story. The next chapter directly switched the scene, and an inexplicable plot came out. What's wrong, the author is schizophrenic? Even if you are a newbie writing novels, it won't be like this, right? The names are reversed and the plot is suddenly changed. Especially for this plot, the next chapter just disappeared after I was halfway through it. It was really uncomfortable to watch. How did it get over 8 points? Looking for someone to brush it?

All I can say is that the author is really imaginative. A modern pet doctor can talk to a dog, and he also asked Erha to work as a spy for the Queen Mother. What he wrote is even more outrageous. It becomes more and more convoluted later on.

The protagonist of this novel is a virgin from beginning to end. There is a chapter in it. Zhao Shiyuan did many bad things and killed many people. He almost killed the protagonist twice, but even Mr. Dongguo was more bloody than the protagonist. I don't know what to think. There is nothing Chinese about it. It is written as if an old monk is reciting sutras. Like Tang Seng in "Journey to the West", no, he is even more pedantic than Tang Seng. I do not recommend reading this book, not even to Chinese people. He did this a little bit before, who can be right? He goes on like this. How to repay kindness with kindness? You should repay grievance with straightness and repay kindness with kindness, okay. I really can't stand this kind of article. I remind the author, please stop writing. Disgusting.

If you write it yourself, you can mix it up. Could you please clarify the relationship between the characters? There are a lot of typos If you can't do this, author, just stop writing and go play.

Let me tell you, if you haven't watched it yet, I strongly suggest you stop watching it. 1. Now that I have read Chapter 83, I originally thought that the male protagonist was just a person with a slightly dishonest mouth. When I saw that he directly let go of people who tried to kill him several times, I stopped reading. Well, emperors have not been like this since ancient times, and women are benevolent. 2. Regarding the problem of no one being available around Chapter 83: Why don't you bring someone in advance if no one is available? Ask your father if you still know how to go out without anyone else? I can't believe that he is a modern person. It is the most irritating if someone doesn't take care of him and asks him to do some nonsense. Is it as important as you to provide disaster relief and lack of people? 3. The plot is outrageous: After being kidnapped by an old man from the Zoroastrian Cult (preliminary judgment may be a gray organization similar to bandits), he found a hot spring on his way back (?) The hot spring is under a stone (?) Sweet potatoes grow in the hot spring (?) And are cooked (??) The remaining vines can be used for planting (???) This passage is no less outrageous than: after the rabbit crashed into a tree and died, it roasted itself, served it to your mouth, and finally stuffed its fur into your hand. 4. The positioning of Zoroastrianism is unclear: At first, I thought it was a non-governmental organization that serves the people. It seems to have great power and prestige, and its initial judgment ability is not small. The old man among them made me feel outrageous. He felt like an elderly version of Long Aotian (by the way, are you old? Is he really an assassin?) When I saw this character written, I actually used Scabbs Sword Oil (an agent of MI7 in Stormwind City) to bring in the good guy. The combat power of this old guy is simply ridiculous. Well, an organization that can use such a powerful old man must be an incredible organization, right? But! Such an organization can't even detect a single corrupt official? To be honest, I have a bit of a change of heart about this organization. I feel that it is a bit like an organization marching in a gray area, an organization that is rotting from the roots, like an empty tree. Nothing to see Summary: I didn't think about what to write at all, I wrote wherever I thought, and I wanted to do this again and again. The protagonist's sense of existence gradually faded, and the plot was more than just a running account. It felt stinky and long. I seriously doubt that I had written an outline at all. If it were a full score of 10, I think I could only give it 4 points.