Mai Goddess Appearance

Author: Are you a Feng Shui master? Why is there no male protagonist in the extra episode? The ending is a bit deceptive.

It started well, but the ending was a bit sloppy, bro.

The ending is too general

The author is just like the protagonist in the book, a little funny, making it easy and cheerful to read, and in a happy mood. I have excerpted a lot of things about Feng Shui and physiognomy in the article. When I have time, I will look for relevant books and study them. Is the following extra chapter an outline of the author's subsequent article? I hope that the author will improve his feng shui, divine appearance, gossip and writing style in the follow-up work!

Really interesting It was good at the beginning, but I really couldn't understand the subsequent emotional journey. Green Tea was obviously trying to steal the heroine's boyfriend, but the heroine thought that Green Tea wasn't secretly here to steal her boyfriend, so she thought that Green Tea was good? ? ? She believed whatever Green Tea said and did whatever she was told to do. What if Green Tea really wanted to harm her? How do you feel about letting Green Tea and her boyfriend be alone together without worry? In the early stage, we talked about how powerful the heroine is, and who is the descendant of such and such, but in the end, if anything happens, the hero will be the one to save the heroine at the critical moment, or else he will ask other ghosts for help. He doesn't even know how to use his Five Emperors' money to amplify his moves, but the heroine and her boyfriend use it better than The heroine is still six. She didn't understand the ultimate move after watching it once and she won't let anyone teach her. Are you waiting for your boyfriend to come and protect you every time? After watching most of the heroine's skills, she really doesn't have much. In this case, why don't you just use the name of someone's descendant? Can others scold her? She never speaks back. This time someone said something bad to her. The next time we meet the heroine seems to have forgotten about it. She looks very aggrieved. Just because she wants to accumulate merit does not mean that she is suffering from all kinds of anger. She is often misunderstood by some people and thinks that the heroine is cursing him. However, the heroine still... I want to continue to persuade her, forget it, after all, I have to have a kind heart, but I don't know why the author suddenly has something to do when the heroine is mainly trying to coax her friends or persuade others, and then leaves when she is sad. So do you want to coax her or not? The author didn't explain how he said goodbye to her, nor did she go back to retrieve her after the incident, so the plot felt like it jumped very quickly. It's not very good-looking. People who like to watch strong women will really have a heart attack after watching it.

I broke up with my ex-boyfriend out of nowhere and got together with the male protagonist. It felt like at least half of the whole book was telling stories and citing allusions. I was speechless, and all the monsters and monsters were easily solved.

Didn't I say no CP?

It's really a confusing plot. I read it in the synopsis and read that there is no CP. In the early stage, I fell in love with the male god in the school, and then I fell in love with a guy like Jiang. It was also said that the heroine's descendant is very powerful. But when something happens, the guy Jiang or something saves her. And then there are other plots in the middle that are not very coherent. Some foreshadowings have no follow-up at all. The ending is also a bit sloppy and perfunctory. The writing is not good and there are too many typos. I don't know how it got a rating of 9.0 Or more.

I read a lot of comments saying that the little story inserted is too wordy, but I personally feel that it is very good and easy to understand. I feel that the author is a master. Various stories and techniques are easy to pick up. The ending feels too rushed. Although all the problems have been explained, I still feel that there is still more to learn.

It's a bit unfinished, the ending is even though the outline of the story is written out, the male protagonist is not good either.