Reborn in the 1980s: I Became the Stepmother of Two Children

I have read about 300 chapters, and I feel that the writing is pretty good, but it doesn't stop me from complaining. At the beginning of the article, Xia Qingshan is not a bad person, but he is really irresponsible. Since you have two children, you have to take on the responsibility of custody and upbringing, right? Especially since your old mother is gone and your brother and sister-in-law are so virtuous. The daughter-in-law you have only married a few days will not hide her intention to be a vicious queen in front of you. Mom, even though it was said verbally, you didn't know it at the time, not to mention that the male protagonist really took it seriously at that time. Under such circumstances, he could forget about the child and forget about his selfless work in the factory. I was also shocked. No matter what I write later, I can't save his image. It can be said in the article that there is a high incidence of cancer. Could it be that this family or their related people have all encountered it? I skipped chapters and saw so many things, including Xia Xiuer, Xia Qingshan's mother, Xia Dong's biological mother and grandmother, the restaurant owner Li, who had forgotten who he was, the things the heroine had seen since she was a child and reminded her of her death in the end, the older patients Dr. Mo met during his treatment, etc. Some things are not always better, and it feels a little inconsistent to write about such a high incidence of tumors, and there are other places. Of course, the flaws do not hide the flaws. I hope the author will write better and better and have more good works.

Good looking😊

Overall, it looks pretty good. It would be even better if I could have a biological child of my own.

I suggest you don't read it if you want to see the relationship between the male and female protagonists. Don't read it if you want to see a sweet story. To sum up, the male and female protagonists get married right away In about three hundred chapters of living together, both parties developed feelings, but the heroine was determined to divorce. It was not until chapters six or seven hundred that the hero pursued the heroine and they decided to remarry.

In modern times, apart from being able to write novels, Lin Yue's other skills are not outstanding. After passing through, Lin Yue designs clothes, makes fertilizer machines, fertilizer formulas, food, and is very powerful in all kinds of things. Even in fighting, except for those few, she is really invincible. Although it is said that she has learned Jeet Kune Do, Taekwondo... It means that she only knows a little bit, but she does not specify how many levels she belongs to. Let's talk about Xia Qingshan, a rough guy. He is a careful person when it comes to the factory. He is not. In the part where he is going to get divorced a few hundred chapters later, the heroine doesn't know what color he likes, what his hobbies are, and what he likes to do. The result is that he doesn't know anything. He only knows to lose weight and eat more supplements. Lin Yue doesn't buy a few clothes in any shape. He is still making clothes. I don't know where the face came from to say that he likes it at that time, so people who like to see the emotional line of the hero should not come here. Some places need to be written in detail but are summarized. For example, in the court in Beijing, in order to save Lin Yue, various methods were used to pave the way, and even divorce was proposed. However, on the day of the trial, it was simply about providing evidence and that was it. It was said that I would visit my old friends on behalf of my grandparents, but there was no more. Xiu'er is a very scary daughter when she thinks about it. She plays black when she is white, and she plays around when she is black. Treat her as a child. The part where she was kidnapped is a powerful character. Don't treat her like a child. She is really acting like a child and acting cute.

I was dealing with it earlier, but later on I just wanted to chase the ending and there was no ending. Isn't it a bit too much?

Ink-stained and unfinished

My author is amazing, he writes quite well.

The plot is exciting and the writing is brilliant.

No ending?