Chaotic Celestial Body

I've read more than 500 chapters! I feel like I can't stand it anymore. Although the fighting part is very exciting, the plot is always the same! The protagonist comes from the world of cultivation and most of the people in the world of cultivation are enemies, and others take the initiative to provoke the protagonist. When he returns to the fairy world and becomes enemies with many superpowers, it is others who provoke the protagonist! If the plot is the same, you can also think of the plot later, so there is no need to read it! This book is suitable for people who are short of books!

It's okay, but there are a lot of typos

Author, why don't you write that the protagonist's child will be a quasi-god when he is born? You are also amazing: it won't be long before everyone becomes a god: the child who dominates the three swords with one sword is not as powerful as you wrote.

I think the plot is okay, the only drawback is that there are a lot of typos

Let's go to Chapter 271 first. What Ma Tianyun said before was that the 8th became the third in Chapter 271. In addition, the cultivation level is chaotic, and the fighting level is skipped without thinking. Book friends can take a good look at what I said to see if there is any lie.

The protagonist is written with no personality at all. He always talks about showing murderous intentions towards the enemy, but never kills anyone. Moji

It feels like the protagonist is an arrogant and reckless man. For example, in more than ninety chapters, when he was still an outer disciple and killed so many people outside, and returned to the sect, would the elders of the sect not doubt him or try to rob him? I still want to go back even though I know I will do it if I go back, really...

The male protagonist will only say that I want to become stronger, how can I become stronger when I go to the supermarket with women every day? What the male protagonist is best at is assassinating him but not doing it.

The first part was okay, but after a few dozen chapters I didn't want to read it anymore. This was the first time I saw Xiuzhen. He could cross several great realms and kill people at will. It was so outrageous. Isn't it right to be invincible? ? What's the point of doing this? ? Everything went so smoothly, it was boring to watch.

The story structure and protagonist's character are quite good. But my writing skills are poor, and my concepts of logic, quality, and quantity are too poor. Moreover, it is quite frustrating to just dig a lot of holes and not fill them.