I Pick Up Trash in the Immortal Realm

This book is funny or good, but the author is a bit careless and always misses words.

I think it looks good, but...? There are a lot of typos😂

I have read Chapter 107, and many basic sentences in the article do not make sense (it is not a matter of typos) ) From the beginning of traditional Chinese medicine to the auction of Tang Bohu's paintings, he didn't even have basic professional terminology. He couldn't even write a single professional word, but he still had to make up the plot. He completely exposed his shortcomings and seemed clueless. The plot of buying a house and a car was written like a primary school student arguing for a piece of rubber. , Is particularly childish and lacks basic social experience, and the description of conflicts and fights with social people is like a child playing house. The article so far is like watching a primary school student writing an essay. There are mistakes everywhere. The only attractive main line is collecting garbage and Taobao, but there is very little ink. In short, the quality of the work is so poor that I can't even understand the basic words and sentences. How such an article passed the review, brought Qimao down.

There is too much nonsense, too verbose, and the plots are all the same. Many of them can be guessed, and a single fight will take several chapters!

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The writing idea in the early stage is very good, but the content written in the first part is too different from the later part. The characters in the later part are ruined and the plot is not so attractive. I don't want to read it at about 80 progress.

This look, that look, a sentence must be repeated at the beginning of each chapter, it takes seven or eight chapters to be an inconspicuous little gangster, the book lives up to its name!

It's very wordy. If you don't let a pet in the golden elixir realm out to fight, you use it as wings. You even hide one in your house. Why are you hiding it? Will you release the two? Aren't you invincible? I'm really speechless. This kind of thing

The protagonist was made into a character who was looking for trouble but still thought he was right. The author is probably the same, thinking he was right. It was purely funny.

A woman you don't know lives in your house for so many days, and the male protagonist is still at her mercy... Is there really a shortage of women?