Taoyuan Little Medical God

This book is very beautiful, the writing is wonderful, and the writing is brilliant. I like it very much.

The review has been written, and I would like to read the follow-up.

The stud story is disgusting to watch, and the male protagonist is very scumbag. He hooks up with this dog-licker who likes that, and he looks like a slave, as if he has never seen a woman in eight lifetimes. And the widow Zhang is a rural shrew. She doesn't talk about hooking up with men, but she also treats herself as the sun. Do others have to revolve around you? Few of the people in the story have ever seen the world, they are country folk.

If I could summarize this book, I could say this: a running account. This is a complete running account! That's right, that's right, a running account! I now feel that even primary school students can quickly write such articles, and soon they will surpass such chronicle articles! In summary, there are three points that can be improved: 1. Too many modal particles. Although this book describes the story of a "medical fairy" in rural areas, the language level is not very high, but speaking out the words makes readers feel the atmosphere of simplicity. It is not just "ah, wow, ah", but the expression of declarative sentences makes readers more comfortable than the excessive accumulation of modal particles. The rhetorical questions frequently used in this book not only fail to sublimate the comfort of the book and the level of empathy it gives readers, but instead appear to be too cumbersome, lengthy and monotonous. 2. Adjective poverty. "In an instant (disappear), quickly, quickly" appears frequently in this book, which seems monotonous. In almost every chapter, the words "quickly, quickly" appear 4 or 5 times, or even more. The improvement method will not be described in detail. 3. Key words are too repetitive within the description scope of key events. Same problem as above. The improvement method will not be described in detail.

The more I write, the less interesting it becomes. Cultivation seems to have nothing to do with the protagonist. I write about women all day long. I wonder if the male protagonist is just a stud? A beautiful woman will fall in love with the male protagonist?

So beautiful, so beautiful

I haven't seen enough yet, it's beautiful

Ignorance, chaos, and the addition of characters make the storyline, which was not compact in the first place, even more boring!

Wonderful and great

Looks good, but a bit messy