The Cannon Fodder Female Partner in Quick Travel: She Rebelled

It looks good, but there are a lot of typos, and the characters are sometimes mixed up, but the plot is good and very interesting. In the end, 914...

The parts I've read before all have the flavor of President Cookie... The plot is okay, and it's enough to have fun watching in your spare time. Su Shuangtian is similar to my recent reading style, and it's easier to read the titles. It's actually good to change the taste later, or change the background.

Not bad

The reasons why I gave it a neutral rating: 1. The chapter "The Wedding Was Ruined" clearly stated that Wei Ranzhi's parents died early, and her only grandfather also died, but why did there appear to be two more parents and an aunt later on? Being a reader fool? 2. I feel like the plot is a bit draggy. 3. The title is not eye-catching and the types are a bit lacking. That's it. If possible, I hope the author can try the ancient, future and apocalyptic planes instead of being a bloody Mary Sue.

Well, it's really quite good. It's a short story, so I can at least keep reading. But similarly, there are still some defects that have not been fully repaired.

Relying on the superiority of the original owner's identity, the protagonist kept chattering and did not take any action. He just finished a chapter in a dull way (slobbery). Although the introduction says to win by lying down, there is really no need to do so. It is too casual and seems to be just relying on words to make up the word count. The plot and emotions come out of nowhere, and the protagonist's emotional lines are few and sudden. The supporting characters in each plane feel the same narcissism which makes me powerless, they all feel the same. The plot is really childish -_-||, in general, it's like children quarreling, all talk and no action

Do you understand that I feel like I want to go to the toilet but haven't finished defecating yet?

Seen 166 so far It didn't step on my bad spots, but it's okay. The story is too simple and bland But the story framework is okay. I can feel that the author wants to write a different fast-travel novel, but. . . The relationship between the male and female protagonists progresses too fast, with little or no daily routine. Their relationship is mostly expressed through external factors, and after watching several worlds, they all have a bad relationship with their parents, with a scumbag father and a scumbag mother. Ennnn is a bit strange. Also, the male and female protagonists have impressive IQs, but the author has foreshadowed it. It seems to be for a reason, not for nothing. I think the plot depends on the writing. . . It's not detailed enough, and there are too many typos. I usually give a good review if the writing and plot are one of them.

It feels like it is just a story skeleton with too few details. The female protagonist is quite capable, but there is no detailed description. The relationship between the male and female protagonists has almost no progression, and it is too easy to fall in love with someone. Otherwise, it would be nice to have a little foreshadowing. I can't stand it anymore. It's not delicate. It would look better if it could add more meat and make it fuller. I still like the story framework.

I feel that the heroine is lazy in everything she does, which makes her unmotivated, and I am not very excited to read it. I want to read a novel with a beautiful and sassy heroine.