The Burning Heaven Dragon Emperor

The plot is old-fashioned, but the protagonist is decisive in killing and is a girl-controller. There are too many exclamation points, which look really uncomfortable. It is recommended to use them more often when the protagonist's emotions are needed to explode (climax), rather than using them right at the beginning, directly making the momentum very high, which will make it difficult for you to resonate later, unless there are golden sentences (throughout the front and back). Emmm, you also use exclamation points when your tone sounds very serious. Personal opinion, if you don't like it, don't comment

There are trolls in this book

This is what fantasy novels should be like

Very good book. Come on!

Well enough

Too slow

Good book, good book, good book, worth reading!

Such wonderful fantasy is rare. Come on!

Not bad, let's have dinner

Really looking forward to the update. It looks so comfortable