The City's Strongest Immortal Doctor

It looks great, and the plot is detailed. Can

It looks good, it just needs to be updated🌝crimin‸ crimin

To be honest, this kind of novel. It's rare to come across good writing. I only watched the beginning. Not to mention the skills, on the second day of practicing the skills, I found myself among the legendary taboos of the previous world. Just read it for freshness, I am still very keen on the latest novels that I eat tomatoes. Although the style of writing in his recent novels is similar. But it doesn't feel like the pace is very fast or rushed. It won't make people impatient, but will lay some foreshadowing to make readers look forward to the next chapter. This is my personal feeling after reading it. I hope the author will take some time to read the novels of those platinum authors and improve his writing. This is just my suggestion, don't write blindly, read more

Too much nonsense

After 1,000 chapters, I was speechless. I was so stupid that after two or three hundred chapters, I wiped out the city. You are so awesome: You can also crush others with force. You are a half-emperor after all. But after seeing the underground world, half-emperors can kill countless people. They are so awesome that they don't even have the aura of the protagonist. What a piece of cake.

What are you writing about? The protagonist is IQ Elementary School and the villain is Kindergarten.

After reading it, the logic was a bit confusing and it made me feel uncomfortable. 1. The Void Worm only appeared once. Why is there a record of how to identify its owner? According to you, he should be very good. Can he just eat ordinary iron? 2. There was a turmoil on the first day of rescuing people, but no one in the hospital knew about it the next day, and then suddenly people abroad found out about it? Then they kill people and set fires at every turn. Are you sure this is a city? Are all the rich and powerful people mentally ill? You are like an ant at every turn, you look like rubbish to everyone, and you are rubbish when you meet a strong person?

The details in all aspects are not handled properly. I really can't stand the protagonist's stupidity.

I can't stand it anymore, the author lacks words and doesn't understand human nature. When you think someone is stupid and then abuse them, will the other person do nothing but "Ah, kill him, kill him"? The names of martial arts are all based on other martial arts such as Qian Ji Bian or martial arts. They like to have "Zhi" in them. Forbidden skills: ✘✘✘✘. It's only a lie that novices can't see it.

Xswl, the various supporting characters have more roles than the protagonist, and there's so much nonsense, it's bullshit