Immortal Grandpa

Good

Very nice to look at and feel very good. It was the first time I saw that the mother of the male protagonist's child was not the female protagonist's. Praise

Can there be fewer typos?

I could still read books when I was on Earth, but after leaving Earth, I felt like the male protagonist had been struck by lightning and his brain was running out of energy. The more I read, the less interesting it became, and I gave up before finishing it.

Taige said, I have to write about even the smallest things. The logic is too confusing, so I gave up the book.

It's very interesting. Come on, author, wait and see.

Except for Susu, there is no one to watch.

It can be seen that the author wants to write like others. Therefore, during the Qi Refining Break, I made up some strange and weird things, but they were superfluous! Even more because the writing is not rigorous in the preface𣎴 versus the postscript! After taking the elixir, Guanglaodao broke through to the seventh level, then to the fifth level, and then to the sixth level. It makes people extremely speechless and unhappy! I feel so bad after reading this!

Too messy and boring

I'm not in the mood to read anything I'm writing.