Football Striker

Overall, it is readable. Although it has flaws, which novel is without flaws at all? I can understand the readers' nitpicking, and I can also understand the author's hard work. I am an old bookworm, and to be honest, I am actually quite picky when it comes to reading. I may give thumbs up to good writing, but I will definitely criticize bad writing, and I will definitely not show mercy. The author of this book can be considered a work of great painstaking effort. Because it's really difficult to write novels about sports, especially football novels about the national football team. You can't compile it even if you want to, because there is really no data, and there are no football stars who can do it. I have no choice but to use Chinese souls to play foreign football. At least I can imagine the excitement of winning the championship. Generally speaking, when I read the current chapters, I did not find any disgusting storyline. There are some minor flaws, but they are all within the acceptable range. Therefore, book friends who have not read it can feel free to read, and I hope the author can create better works. Come on!

It's very uncomfortable to watch. The protagonist has been practicing football for eleven years, but he doesn't have the physical fitness for a game. He was replaced early every game like impotence and premature ejaculation. The protagonist of this setting should be kicked out of the youth team by the team. Who would want a sick man of Youde player! Even young players who have practiced for more than a year can play a complete game. A systematic athlete with a physique of over 90 can only have 60 to 70 minutes of physical fitness? Just like a three-star chef can't stir-fry vegetables - just like that!

It's okay to read. Maybe I've read too many similar novels and it's boring. I'll bookmark it first and read it next time. I'll remove it.

Nice.

The book has its advantages and disadvantages. I have read 246 chapters so far. Let me talk about what I think is a bad point. Screen the readers so that you can save yourself the awkward panic of abandoning the book after reading half of it. The first is the identity of the protagonist. He is a German player in China and his hometown is Chinatown, Germany. I think this is a good setting. Many interesting off-field chapters can be written around this setting. But success and failure are also here, and the domestic attitude of the protagonist team is too licky. There may be some little pink fans who will complain that I am not patriotic and will leave, but we have to distinguish the priorities. This is football literature. We are watching the growth of stars rather than the wolf warriors on the court. If you want to watch patriotic themes, there are many themes to choose from, such as era culture, military literature, anti-war literature, and movies with the theme. How did it happen? First of all, it was the interview with Da Sheng. The protagonist took the initiative to say hello to foreign, that is, domestic media, before he had finished the interview with the domestic media. He gave him a business card and an interview. This is very unreasonable and illogical. Secondly, the national team gives the protagonist the captain's armband, and the protagonist feels uncomfortable because he feels that he is Chinese. This is not pure nonsense. Then you can join the German national team and just return home to play as Angelica. There are many other examples, so I won't go into details. The typical Eggman protagonist, the author can't distinguish the priorities. Even if you arrange a Chinese identity, it won't be so awkward. Then there is the clichéd issue of physical strength in the comment section. The protagonist is a simple cheating type who doesn't want to train himself but waits to improve his skills. In my opinion, this type of protagonist is the worst type and is very empty. If you want to say that talent is the decisive factor in golf skills, it is useless to practice and wait for the system to be upgraded. It is fine and reasonable. However, the problem of physical strength has not been solved so far, and there is not even a little progress. This is the most brainless. If your physical strength does not increase slowly at this age, you will improve if you are willing to practice without losing talent. But the protagonist does not. Currently, he only makes one substitution every game because of his physical strength. It is really nonsense to be touted as a star that can surpass Melo. It is not necessary to be active for a whole game, but it is a big problem to be able to persist for a full game. He may be able to play for half a game with a little confrontation. Such an obvious shortcoming and such a simple targeting method, no one is targeting it, and so many unreasonable things that I can't even mention. . . . .

I didn't watch it for long, I only watched the first part. Let me tell you what you think. First of all, I don't like the character of the protagonist. He is indecisive and nagging. Is it difficult to recognize the original parents? I have a memory, is it difficult? Is it necessary to repeatedly mention that it is unacceptable? In a dull situation, I didn't feel the unique passion in football novels. It felt like a third party was watching the narration. I added a few points and made it much better. I scored a few more goals in today's game. It's all this that makes people uninterested. Maybe I'm asking too much? 😐😐😐

This is the best article I have ever read

Unfinished building

Nice

The only drawback is that the protagonist's shooting skills are perfected too quickly.