Literary Superstar Dad

Good looking, but too little

I really can't stand it anymore, the plot is as bland and tasteless as boiled water. Any current popular song will instantly become a hit. The male protagonist is so lacking in music when he travels through the past era! Every popular song in modern times has something that can resonate with people today, and it can be regarded as a product of the packaging that the times have given rise to. The male protagonist's copying of these saliva songs to make them popular through time is both blunt and inexplicable. I'm confused, if the author can write novels, he can't make up his own songs and lyrics. Isn't it up to you to write them yourself whether they are popular or not? Do you have to take what you already have? I also copied the lyrics over and over again to make up the word count. I guess the author's education level is only high school. .

The subject matter is novel, combining the entertainment industry and raising a daughter, but they are distinct and do not interfere with each other. The characters are well-drawn, the plot is exciting, and the sentences are relatively smooth, but occasionally there are typos or confusing names.

When I read the first forty chapters, I was really moved several times, especially when I was teaching the children to sing Little Star... But after the hundredth chapter, my feelings changed. Pig's Foot kept saying that he was short of money, but why don't you work harder? Just wait for others to come to you and make money by writing songs. If you sing a song a day, won't he make money? Dear author, this is a person who has been reborn. Why doesn't he have the motivation to fight? Speaking of children, you can love them and care for them, but what about pig's feet? You've become doted on, okay? You just want to watch your children play. It's already a hundred chapters and the song starts with Pig's Feet singing. Is this called lack of money? Why do I think the pig's feet are useless after rebirth? Besides, you are a pig-footed person, don't you want to find a wife? Or has the function of the pig's feet deteriorated? Forget about abandoning the book! It's boring!

It's my cup of tea. The author needs to work harder and update more.

It looks good~but there are too few updates

Ahhhh, can the author just finish it? I'm so anxious, woo woo woo.

Plain and simple is the truth.

I can't understand the opening setting. What is the identity of the protagonist through time travel? If there is no introduction to the family where he was born, is he an orphan? So how did he pay for college at his own expense? Or film school! The house you live in now is not rented, so where is it? Also, the kindergarten that my daughter went to was paid in full for more than 80,000 yuan for three years. After all, the principal returned it to him. What kind of profession does he pursue at the age of 19, when he dropped out of school and has no academic qualifications? Nothing was explained. My grandmother's family, who still has a child, can't afford to support a baby even if their daughter goes to college. Is their family too unfeeling? But she is her granddaughter after all! It's okay to raise the children for their father, but it's not like they just stop having contact with each other, unless they are all dead. If you say that you make money and don't care about being famous, then you sign a contract instead. Hey, the story can be written with only these flaws. It seems strange. I am forced to express my sorrow for the purpose of writing new words.

When you write a song outline without watching any movies and don't understand them, you say you don't need to watch them? You are writing a time-travel novel, but you have to be reasonable! There must be a basis for showing off, right? The inexplicable feeling is disgusting.