The Daily Life of a Max-Level Expert Cultivating Immortality

But I found that I don't seem to understand the age of the heroine. She was five years old at the beginning, but after one year, she turned into eight years old for some reason, and after five years she turned into thirteen years old. This made me very confused⊙ω⊙, and where did the male protagonist go? , I have read more than 100 chapters, but the male protagonist's name has never appeared. I only saw a person who seemed to be a relative of the male protagonist. Another question is, how does the heroine create a power?

It would be better if the heroine's cultivation progress could be more normal when she first came to the world of immortality.

I prefer the part about the earth. After I went to the world of cultivation, it became boring. I gave up the article decisively. But in the early stage, I gave it a good review (although it is a bit inexplicable. Can a big cultivator read faces?) Great support

The grandma's attitude turned out to be okay. The heroine's mother was a bastard. She married her own son with a bastard. Her son was a rare high school student who wanted to be a teacher. But because of this bitch, she gave up being a teacher and went to farm in the countryside. Oh my god, what mother wouldn't be angry or hateful! ? Women, think about it, can you be happy that this is your son?

Please update it quickly. Please update it more than once a day. It's not enough.

The logic is confusing, and the plot is unsatisfactory. There are many superfluous plots, and most of the plots are also embarrassing. It is not recommended for adults to read.

It's pretty cool. It would be better if it were updated faster.

When I started reading this novel, I read a lot of negative reviews and almost gave up reading it. But maybe it's just personal preference. Personally, I prefer this type of novel. There are shortcomings in the article. At first, it was said that the heroine became an immortal in order to return to the earth. Later, when she returned to the earth, it was said that the heroine wanted to return to the world of cultivation in order to become an immortal. It was really contradictory at first, but after reading it patiently, I realized that the heroine's return was her obsession. Also, the age at which the heroine returns to Earth is sometimes written very confusingly. But it doesn't hurt to ignore the details. Let's look at the main plot of the article: the heroine failed to escape the tribulation from the world of cultivation and was hacked back to the earth, and then worked hard step by step to return to the world of cultivation, then to the fairy world, then back to the Ehong world, and finally back to the earth. The stories that happened in each interface were different. It gives readers a different experience. The heroine is self-reliant, brave, decisive, ruthless, but kind at heart. The male protagonist was too weak at first, but then became stronger step by step, and finally the male and female protagonists fought side by side. The heroine's parents, siblings are all excellent. The little bun at the end is also very cute, but the ending is too short, too sudden, and it feels like a sudden brake. It would be nice if there were extras. Hahaha! Finally, I hope to see more works from the author.

What about the plot? Although I have only watched more than a hundred pictures, I can say that some plots are very good, and some plots are relatively dull. Moreover, I found that some characters will appear inexplicably and the author has not explained how they came out. There are also some plots. It is obvious that I am still at home at this moment. I said where to go before, but there is no process and inexplicably appears in other places. There are also acceptable typos. In addition, I think there are some plots that can be written more excitingly (such as with Brother and sister go to the Red Cloud Forest to experience) However, the author always mentions it in one stroke. However, in some places, I don't want to read the author and writes more. There is also the age of the heroine. She was five years old when she passed by, and she will be nine years old two years later. Is this a big problem? On the one hand, although the heroine is very strong, she always feels a little too complacent. Generally speaking, although there are some places that are not good, I can make do with it, so I gave it an average rating.

The dialogue is too childish and long-winded, and I have to talk a lot about everything. The heroine has lived for tens of thousands of years and is still so childish. She always praises herself to the best of the world.