Poor Family Official

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I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 70. The plot is confusing, the protagonist is incompetent, and he shows no talent or effort along the way. Fighting monsters and upgrading are completely dependent on the inexplicable support of unrelated people. Even before Xinshou Village was released, so much ink was wasted on the philistine talk of family and neighborhood. I didn't see any talent or reason to be proud, I just saw that the author's unconcealable hatred will be repaid! Give up decisively!

Well written. The storyline is concise and the relationships between people are well written. Especially the relationship with Xiao Yin is rarely written like this. In the future, I hope it will be friendship in struggle. Write quickly! I wait.

Among the time-travel themed novels about demons dancing around, this book is really good. It has a bit of the style of Yue Guan Da Da, and the author has written his own style. It is not like other time-travel historical novels, which do not rely on the poetry and songs of my country's 5,000-year civilization. It is unique, beautiful and can increase knowledge at the same time. It is indeed a good book. There are still good books among 7 cats. Be good at it. Because of the excavation, there are so many so-called cool articles written randomly, like a running account, which are still popular and disgusting to read. They are also called good books.

I'm really speechless. I just want to know how high your IQ is. Ah, you are just a commoner now. Do you think you can cope with the officialdom? You can't even cope with society. You still want to go to ancient times and become a good official directly. How much do you know about the world's ways and intrigues? You may be demented after reading Shuangwen.

It doesn't matter if the protagonist is mediocre. What does it mean to write a female character? Or a queen, then who is the protagonist? If you play for a long time, you are not working for others. The key is to deviate from the big picture, kill your own doctor, and return to the common people after time travel. I want to know how the common people can marry the prince, and have a 6 or 7-year-old child in a few years. You don't think that the prince who travels through time can take his wife at will. When I saw it, I just looked through the catalog and it was boring.

This book is different from the mindless and refreshing articles that are prevalent nowadays. It starts from an ordinary science college student who traveled through time and became an ordinary person. He climbed to a high position step by step and promoted the development of the nation with his advanced thoughts and knowledge. The development of the plot is relatively dull, but from another aspect, this kind of plot development is more realistic. The author does not overly highlight the protagonist's abilities and shape him into a perfect, omnipotent and omniscient person. Instead, he arranges for people such as Duan Wencheng, Meng Lanshan, Yin Jun, etc. To assist, making the characters more real. At the same time, the addition of Su Liu, a female time traveler, also makes the plot more exciting and eye-catching (the protagonist is no longer unique). The author chose the setting of the story in the early Ming Dynasty, which is also the author's originality. Generally speaking, time-travel articles usually set the era back in time, which can better highlight the difference of the protagonist. However, I feel that such a protagonist is not standing out from the crowd but too alternative. Ideas that are too advanced are regarded as heresy by contemporary people regardless of whether they are right or wrong. How can they be implemented? I think this book is worth reading I would like to give the author a little advice here, that is, I hope the author can establish a complete story background of his own and not add too much historical background of the Ming Dynasty, otherwise it will be a bit like a novel and a history book, and it will be suspected of being two different things. It's just a personal feeling. I hope the author doesn't have to think too much. If you think it's wrong, just continue writing according to your own layout. Don't worry about my bias.

There are 390 photos. The protagonist is already 30 years old and it seems that he can no longer be the emperor. This is not like the Iron Dynasty book. Defeat the Western countries, control Siberia, North America, Australia, and Southeast Asia, control the world's resources, and control the world's waterways. Updates are quite slow.

Full of praise, let me praise myself first.

When I saw that I was taking Japanese pirates to suppress bandits, I didn't want to see it. The handling here was not very good. First, Harry can control 5,000 Japanese pirates by himself, and train them like a bunch of dogs; second, since he thinks the Japanese pirates are determined to persevere, why do they give them weapons to suppress the bandits together? The Japanese pirates will not face the battle. I really thought that after a period of time, Hallelujah brainwashed me and I lost my basic IQ. The author was so moved that he wanted them to occupy the mountain and become the king there, let Harry be the king of the mountain, and station 5,000 Japanese pirates. Harry's immortal bones are all gone. Those Japanese pirates don't give your book an ending on the spot. They look down on the readers' intelligence. Thirdly, I wanted to see if the plot of the bandit suppression could see if the author had any outstanding military arrangements, but he actually arranged a scene of beating gongs to cover up the transfer of his team's personnel, and pretending to be sophisticated. Do you think you are Zhuge Liang! Can't you see that your 5,000 troops were deployed yesterday and today? Do you think you really have an army of 100,000? It must be said here that your so-called 100,000 army is nothing more than adding more firewood to the camp at night. You must pay attention to the fact that you are a foreigner. Even though the locals are a ragtag group, you must also consider Will they worry about their own lives and take advantage of the favorable geographical location to conduct reconnaissance and platooning? It is better to briefly mention it or copy it from other experts. Fourthly, I really want to ask why the Dafeng Dynasty is mentioned in the book. I hope the author can clear up the confusion. The background you wrote is that of Renzong and Xuanzong of the Ming Dynasty. So many allusions from that time are used. Why can't people who have traveled to the past in the present era do things with a little anticipation, or arrange the plot? After all, it is easy for readers to be immersed in the events of that era. Although there is inexplicably a so-called empress dowager, and the death of the first emperor was murdered. Although the author also has his own demands in arranging the plot, I felt uncomfortable reading it. This is a personal statement. Finally, the writing style is indeed mediocre. I can only say that I want to tell my inner story well because of my simplicity. What I hate the most is the unnecessary cleverness when the author wants to occasionally change the writing style to humor. The author still put a lot of thought into writing the book. You can also take a look at it. It's just a carrot and cabbage. I hope the author can work harder and write better!