Travel Through Primitive Tribes and Unlock Illustrations to Gain Points

Many settings are problematic or even broken. For example: 1. Bone Whistle: Laughing to death, the material selected for the bone whistle in Chapter 44 of the original text is: [The thickest leg bone of the big-horned elk in the snowy mountains]. Chapters 31-32 describe the deer's size as "huge" and "hill-like" many times. Can you imagine how thick this bone whistle is? After finishing the bone whistle, he turned to the heroine and specifically determined that the heroine would use the bone whistle to direct the battle in the future. As a result, in Chapter 49, the bone whistle was actually used in actual combat for the first time, and the person who blew the whistle became the protagonist. Emmmmmmm…? 2. Quenching: All things can be quenched, but it is really difficult to quench. Wooden sticks need to be quenched after being roasted and carbonized. Stone axes are also quenched after being burned with fire. It is said that it can increase the hardness... The ancients had the practice of heating the stones and then pouring cold water on them, but that was for quarrying (especially shale)! Is it to make the stone explode due to thermal expansion, cold contraction and rapid expansion of water, quenching the fire? ? 3. Divine power: From the beginning of the chapter, I have been bragging about my magical power, and I have been trying to make the protagonist have no magical power. I thought I was going to suppress it, but in chapter 62, it turned out to be a big mess. "Latu" is blown into [unique divine power], in fact: ⑴It can only take effect within your own territory (only about 300 square meters in the original text); ⑵Okay, this is a territorial skill. The territory can be expanded without any problem. Then you seem to have some territorial skills, bringing some useful bonuses to the [territory], but in the end, you can only add some attributes to yourself [solo] when you are within the territory? The output, attack and defense of the territory have not been improved, the attributes and abilities of the territorial citizens have not been improved, the reputation, intimidation, and luck of the lord have not been improved... Is this considered a territorial skill of peat? ⑶Okay, you are the author and you are the biggest. The king of Kaijiang insists on being recognized by Shoucheng Zhineng. No matter how small a mosquito is, it is still meat. How about you use these 20 added attributes? Just in Chapter 62, I wrote that the four-dimensional attributes were +5 each, but they never appeared again. The attributes were all restored. During the battle, these 20 attributes were not mentioned at all and were not used at all. This matter completely ceased to exist? ? 4. Kiln burning: The setting is extremely evil. Throughout the winter, he spent a lot of free time firing pottery, but just fired without unlocking the furnace device and corresponding skills. After spring, hungry and crazy bears (yes, that's right, bears that live alone and have extremely wide territories gather into a group of hundreds of bears) attacked, almost triggering a beast wave. At this urgent moment, he began to study making bricks! No, you can only live in a naturally formed cave, and then bother Baal to burn bricks but use them to build walls? Think about it again? ? ? You only have a total population of 18 including women and children, but you have to start from scratch to figure out how to build a kiln (it's just a small kiln of 2×3 meters, which can be unlocked and shared when making pottery in winter), and then spend a lot of time digging mud, kneading mud, drying in the shade, burning again, and building walls? No matter how hard the fired bricks are, if there is no reliable and sufficient adhesive, wouldn't they be equivalent to a pile of small gravel? What's the point? Anyway, it's all about digging soil and mixing mud. It's the same amount of work. When facing such a formidable enemy, shouldn't we choose the most cost-effective and most effective route [rammed earth wall]: dig deep trenches, mix the excavated soil directly into mud in the inner circle, add grass, vines and branches to increase toughness. The rammed earth wall should be as high as possible, and the output will be at least several times that of a brick wall with the same investment. 5. Door: When building the first door, productivity was at its worst. Just to keep out the wind, but did you have to cut down big trees (rough stone axes), split boards, and make hinges? After splitting the wooden planks, it still took several pieces to build the door. So why not just cut down the small trees with thick arms or legs and cut the vertical sections to build the door? The wooden boards that were roughly cracked by wooden wedges + stone smashing were all internally damaged, and were far less strong than those spliced ​​with small-diameter logs; the splicing gaps between the tree trunks could be completely filled with grass, rattan bark, animal hair and animal skin scraps, etc.; The hinge structure was completely unsuitable for such an extremely heavy door, not to mention the rope hinges made of rattan bark + animal skin, which could not keep up with the load-bearing capacity. 6. Bed: When you don't even have any tools, is it really suitable to use [wooden boards] + bed legs to make a four-legged bed? Similar to doors, without suitable tools, extremely low productivity, insufficient manpower, and no food storage (insufficient energy supply), you choose to copy modern structures without thinking? Please use this amount of work to build a nest, lay out shrub branches, and bedding. Ten times the output is not a problem. 7. Beast language skills: The unlocking mechanism of bestiality skills is a mystery. Some animals will unlock their corresponding bestiality as soon as they touch it and open the illustrated book; some animals will not be unlocked no matter how many times they are touched; When Chapter 35 "Cow Moo" is unlocked, it is written clearly and clearly. It is the protagonist who speaks human language, and the cow can understand it. At that time, other people nearby thought that it was impossible for the cow to understand human speech and laughed at it. When Chapter 60 "Dragon Roar" is unlocked, you can no longer speak human language, and you have to imitate the dragon's cry... So in the future, does the cow moo also have to imitate the cow's meow, and the deer's meow must imitate the deer's cry? 8. Attribute points: ⑴Agility: In Chapter 53, the agility was already 11 points; in Chapter 73, the agility dropped back to 10 inexplicably. ⑵Spirit: In Chapter 51, the mental attribute suddenly appears, and it goes directly from 4 to 7; in Chapter 62, when the Spirit reaches 10 points, "Lulu" adds an additional 5 points, which means that the protagonist has already experienced the feeling of 15 points of Spirit; in Chapter 65, when the Spiritual Power increases from 10 points to 11 (the extra 5 points have long since disappeared, it just rises to 11 purely), the original text blows: [An indescribable feeling of coolness... Suppresses the excitement in the heart]. Come on, there was no excitement at 15 points of mental strength. How much excitement is there at 11 points? There are also very, very, very many other problems, such as the simplest "torch" of firewood wrapped in pine tar, which is unlocked very late; the "healing technique" can only heal wounds but not diseases; the spear thrower can be used directly in actual combat without training (the spear thrower significantly changes the throwing path, center of gravity, and focus, and requires a lot of training to master); the horns of the big-horned elk have been ignored and completely unused (for the Stone Age background, this is simply a rare and rare material)... Hey, really, there are too many questions, and the whole article is made up of things that are taken for granted. It is really impossible to list them all.

The plot has twists and turns and the writing is smooth, eye-catching and thought-provoking. Comparing primitive people with modern people, are primitive people lagging behind or modern people have lost too much? We have added too many unnecessary things to our survival, and we are doomed to be confused, hesitant, and directionless. The great abundance of material life may bring about the extreme poverty of spiritual world.

Overall, it's okay, but are forty-two and forty-three the later chapters? How can I run into some false world or something like that?

No one among primitive people wrote about emotions.

It's getting better and better, but I feel like updates are too slow.

What was written in such a mess?

Write about advanced weapons at once. The combat power of iron weapons increases several times. As soon as you encounter a primitive tribe of 100 people, you will run away. Your tribe has 4 third-level divine powers. How can an ordinary tribe of 100 people do better than a tribe with iron weapons?

Nice

Overall, it's pretty good, and I'm looking forward to the plot direction in the future.

What the bad reviews say is indeed true. If you don't believe it, you can check it out for yourself.