Luoyang Brocade

It's just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, you can discuss it if it's reasonable and well-founded. Don't criticize. Summary: The greater the expectations, the greater the disappointment, Luoyang Jin, Luo: the male protagonist Jun Luo (common name: Jiang Huai). Yang: the heroine Danyang Princess (common name: Pang Jiawen), Jin: Bai Ruojin (real name Bai Cheng) is the foil in the early stage. Looking at the names alone, it should be that Pang Jiawen ended up with Jiang Huai, who might be the emperor in the future. In order to preserve the choice of the heroine Bai Lianhua, Jiang Huai might have robbed her. Then Bai Ruojin was too weak and was forced to accept it. The heroine won her lover and became famous. Haha, scumbag. The heroine: a PUA master, an experienced dramatist, a scheming girl, and a flirt. Why do you rate the heroine so highly? 1. Pua male protagonist: Chapter 304 has passed since rebirth. Sometimes he says he has not let go, sometimes he says he has no feelings, sometimes his heart is cold, and sometimes he cannot resist his own feelings, over and over again, endlessly, even the author can't stand it anymore. He used Zhang Shuo's words to say that the heroine is "spreading pancakes" and repeatedly torturing Bai Ruojin. You can tell by looking at Bai Ruojin's changes before and after. He is becoming less and less confident, weaker and more suspicious. Every move of the heroine can make him feel that he cannot survive. . . Waiting for a series of sexy operations, Bai Ruojin can't influence the heroine. This is a deep PUA, no matter how the heroine explains it, and what kind of complicated mental journey she has. 2. Veteran actor: In the Jiang family, she is completely acting, working hard to be cute and fooling around. With a series of descriptions such as "as heartless as a seven or eight-year-old child", "lively and cute", and "crouching at the master's feet", the heroine is like a pet in the Jiang family to please them. The heroine has experienced two lives + tragic death. It is normal for her to mature in age after experiencing life and death. Coupled with the experience of being a ghost, I personally feel that she is more calm than Mrs. Li, instead of acting cute at every turn. 3. Scheming girl: What she does is seriously inconsistent with the psychological description. The practice of green tea makes white lotus heart. Xu Lingzi's aunt is a slightly more impressive example. She knew that her cousin was stupid, so she took her away directly. She found a chance to talk to her grandmother, instead of watching a stupid relative make stupid mistakes, not to mention the whole family. It seems like he is being given opportunities again and again, but in fact he keeps motivating his cousin to act stupidly, and his approach is very green tea. 4. Flirting with girls: This is closely related to flirting with cuteness. Flirting with the master, flirting with the uncle, flirting with Xu Jin, flirting with Gao Peng, flirting with Zhao Heng. People who have been in love are very sensitive to love. Sometimes you can tell whether the other person is interested in you with just one look. By pretending not to know, you can gain peace of mind and get other people's kindness to you, and enjoy the dividends of ambiguity. If you know that the other person is interested in you, but you don't restrict the distance and just flirt a little, isn't that just raising a fish? However, after rebirth, it is indeed good not to retaliate for things that have not happened. After all, no matter how bad this person was in the previous life, he was still the same person in the previous life. This person in this life has nothing to do with the previous life. Not taking revenge when he has not become bad is worthy of praise. Male Protagonist: Jiang Huai was written too strong, like a boss, not like a human being, and the various descriptions were very shocking, which is a loss of points. The more suppressed the emotions are in the early stage, the easier it will be to overflow in the later stage. The characters are established, the descriptions before and after are well-founded, and the transitions are natural. Bai Ruojin: What have you done to offend the author? You are so disabled that you are so embarrassed in every way.

This is the second novel I haven't skipped reading, the plot is so engaging. The author is really imaginative. I really like articles like this. I really want to know whether the little girl's other half is still the person before her rebirth or her master.

It is a book that I like very much. I have read all kinds of novels for many years. This is the first time I write a review. I just read Chapter 30, but I like the plot very much. I feel that this is a very meaningful novel. It is not ridiculous or procrastinating, and the progress is also very good. Come on, author, keep up the good work and update soon.

Let the heroine and Jiang Huai be together

Wow, at first I thought the writing was average, but as I went on, the logic became more rigorous and the plot became more ups and downs. Not bad, the extra episode made up for the regret. The whole text talks about love, hate, and hatred, and finally finds the best place for each other. Male pig's trotters may not necessarily end up with female pig's trotters. It's very good. It would be great to make into a TV series.

The author has buried a trap for himself, that is, it is suspected that the male protagonist and the female protagonist have a master-student relationship, they are friends with the female protagonist's father, and their nephew is a love rival. From the time when the heroine returns to her parents, everything written about is trivial. The plot progress is so slow that skipping ten or eight chapters will not affect the plot at all. Now the heroine has accepted Jiang Cheng's feelings. If Jiang Huai is chosen in the future and his uncle steals his nephew's woman, I cannot accept it ethically. If he continues to be with Jiang Cheng, Jiang Cheng will not be able to support the male protagonist. Because the author made Jiang Huai too strong and perfect.

Don't miss it if you are a lover of ancient Chinese novels, the text is wonderful and beautiful! ! !

Friends who are new to this trap, please stop. You will get angrier as soon as possible. The heroine is a perfect green tea character.

When I first read the introduction, I found it quite interesting. Bai Yueguang before taking revenge at the beginning, my heart was excited and my hands were shaking as I continued reading. The previous plot lived up to expectations, but it turned out that the relationship between Bai Ruojin and the heroine was a misunderstanding... The main bad points here are: 1 Characters Confusing identity of the male protagonist: From the first chapter to the end, I couldn't tell which one was the male protagonist. Is it Bai Ruojin, Jiang Huai, or Zhao X? Anyway, I can't tell. The heroine's emotions are chaotic: as soon as she surrenders her favor to Jiang Huai, she thinks of Bai Ruojin's kindness to her; similarly, when she treats Bai Ruojin well, she feels that she has failed Jiang Huai. Seeing this, I just want to say, how come the heroine is so like a scumbag, a green tea bitch, and a peerless white lotus. Other than that, I found the plot to be a bit confusing.

The author's article is very good. Later, he suggested that the male protagonist and the female protagonist grow up together on the battlefield and share life and death together. The cruel battlefield will be more realistic. It is recommended that the supporting characters receive more lunch boxes.