I Just Want to Make Elixirs, but All My Disciples Are Rebels Against the Master.

I read Chapter 58 and I can't stand it anymore I have read so many chapters, and the only core content you have given is the happy life of raising a daughter, which has nothing to do with the title of your book. It is not that your description is not good, but in the more than fifty chapters I have read, you have to come to this kind of scene every few chapters to feel happy watching your daughter having fun, and you have begun to abuse your writing habit. Brother, can you realize that the protagonist is a time traveler with a hook? If you let the protagonist in the book immerse himself in his own world in this book, and you, the author, bring it in yourself, what you will write is what you are doing now. He takes the hook in a shantytown and claims to protect his disciples, but in fact he can't provide anything. , I have been narcissistic all the time, and I probably won't be able to see this challenge between the master and the disciple. In fact, you simply explain the failure at the beginning. Once the main conflict of the apprentice is solved, you can fast forward to 17 or 8 years old, and start the second time. What I am writing now, to be honest, I don't know what the readers are expecting.

Correct mistakes and make them look different.

After seeing the latest chapter 345, I can't eat anymore. The entire article has nothing to say in the title. Overall, it can be said that the writing is emotionally delicate, but if it is written too much, it will appear to be too pretentious. The protagonist is like a tool pushed by the Tiandao script. He has no goals and helps anyone who has a problem. If he likes to help others, it doesn't matter if he helps his apprentice or confidante. Passers-by who can't be beaten by eight poles also follow him. They just wrote several chapters together, which is very bad. I don't know how I expect the article to proceed. I'm either refining alchemy or helping others. Golden Finger doesn't know how useful it is to improve my cultivation and my relationship with my confidante. I don't know if this article has an outline.

Doesn't the author think Ling Ying's emotional line is wrong? I feel like she suddenly fell in love with the protagonist

Who knows the sense of redemption found in this novel among the seven cats😭😭😭

The writing is quite interesting, but not many people read it, and no one commented on the jokes and jokes written by the author, which is a pity.

Goubaan

I live for this kind of book🙏🙏

If the realm is too small, the elixir will become a powerful one.

Very very good!