Digging Out My Spiritual Roots? After My Rebirth, My New Teacher Treated Me Like a Treasure

I've reached about 100 chapters. This book is generally good. The plot is compact and not draggy. The characters are well-developed, but there are always mistakes in the text. People who read it are confused. The author should read it himself before publishing next time. There are many places that don't make sense. Apart from this, everything else is good.

It seems so good that the author and the heroine have a grudge... Seeing all the experiences of abusing the heroine now, there is still a system that is so powerful that it cannot be shaken... The heroine has not been tortured to death by the author... It's really amazing👍 The good guys are currently going through disasters...

The front is fine, but the back is completely broken. The Qinglong, as the male protagonist's contracted beast, disappears in the later period, and the sword that the male protagonist gave to the female protagonist also disappears. In the later period, the female protagonist turns green + gold when fighting. Do you remember that the female protagonist is a sword cultivator, and the female protagonist's mother's disappearance is still an unsolved mystery. There is also the mistress of Luoshen Palace as the heroine's grandmother. And if I remember correctly, the stronghold of Luoshen Palace is in Beizhou. In the final battle, she went to defend Nanzhou...? And Ji Xunzhou's matter was not mentioned until the end. He just mentioned that Yu Xiao was dead and then made a puppet to control the Beizhou Sect. Where was Xuan Xiao? When I wrote the last part, I just remembered which one to write which... Also, didn't the heroine give the inheritance to seventy or eighty people from the divine race? The final battle feels like there is no such thing, there is no drama at all...

This male protagonist can be killed with one sword in the Mahayana stage, but he can't deal with someone who is several levels below him. It makes me laugh to death.

Good-looking, good-looking,

There is no one or thing that I find lovable. You can read it in Shuhuang. The heroine is the daughter of Heaven. She was defeated in the previous life and can be reborn and start over to fight again. All kinds of talents, abilities and opportunities are just there. Tiandao chased after him to feed him. No one else would want to accept their fate and get a share of the pie.

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It's good to watch, but the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists are too bland, as if they were forced to pull strings together.

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