Return of the Sword Immortal

My deadline is approaching. After reading this heavenly book, my cultivation has greatly increased, I have broken through the tribulation period, achieved the supreme immortal position, and my life span has greatly increased. I strongly recommend all Taoist friends to read this heavenly book. I hope all Taoist friends will seize the opportunity! Live for thousands of years!

I just hope that the author will take it seriously and treat it reasonably, because after writing for a long time, you will enter a blind spot and don't know how to write. If you find that you don't know how to write, I just hope that you can look back at what you wrote and it may give you some inspiration. It is very well written. I like it very much.

The writing is really bad. What is the difference between Fang Ming's old monster's soul and that of a child? After all, Fang Ming's grandfather was once the governor of a province. He fights with Fang Ming like a child, talks nonsense, and goes to see the Dragon King Palace. There is no trace of sloppiness. The old monster has the temper of an old monster.

The writing is quite good, but it borrows too much from "The Strongest Cultivator of Immortality". Some of the cultivation methods and elixirs are borrowed from it. I hope to have some creativity of my own. There are also a lot of typos, but overall it's pretty good.

The author's writing was too procrastinating. He wrote several chapters when he could have written it in one sentence. There was too much water added. Bad review.

An old monster comes back and can think of himself as an 18-year-old kid, which is amazing. This book is a no-brainer.

What are you writing about? Damn, the protagonist is written like a loser. This is a rebirth novel. He is obviously the top combat power in the world of immortality. After he started, he was written like a loser.

Old monsters who have lived for thousands of years are like kindergarten children

Author, can you update it quickly?

The character of the protagonist is so poorly designed. The Rebirth of the Immortal Lord makes the protagonist act and behave like a child.