She Dressed as a Bitch That Was Considered a Scumbag by Thousands of People, and Was Pampered by the Beastmen.

I haven't read such a crazy article in a long time. The content is repetitive or even completely confusing. Aren't foxes blind? Why let him do the work of writing records? Isn't the eagle mute? How could he describe the enemy's situation in words? Isn't the tiger lame? The beast's core is still broken, and the heroine doesn't heal him. How come he becomes the god of war of the tribe later on? And how come the sick and lone wolf we promised became the strongest assassin? In a certain chapter, even the Flame Lion suddenly became the heroine's beast husband, and whether it was the White Mountain Tribe or the Black Mountain Tribe, these two names appeared alternately many times. When the heroine met the tribal leader for the first time, the book described the heroine as a sacrifice picked up from the edge of the black forest and the leader's adopted daughter. Later, it was said that when the leader saw her, it was as if he was looking at another person through her. Later, the leader asked the heroine to be a goddess, or even the leader of the tribe. After that, the leader never even appeared again. Everything makes me question the author's writing status. It's normal for several beast husbands to compete for favor in Beast World, but like this fox who is wreaking havoc and stirring up dissension within the tribe, even at the expense of the tribe's safety, is that enough? They are no longer competing for favor, they are completely seizing power. It makes me feel like I am watching a large-scale workplace drama. The story about the world of beasts should at least talk about the relationship between the beast husband and the female protagonist. Just like the one between the female protagonist and the big tiger at the beginning, why did it completely change the tone of the story?

Can the author take a look at what he wrote? It's a mess.

The plot is okay, but some parts are repeated twice. There are also some typos.

It's very confusing in some places, I wrote the same plot twice

Such a weird writing style, it made me very embarrassed and I was about to suffer from the second grade disease. There is also a lot of repetitive content and inconsistent settings. . . .

The plot is confusing, the language is unclear, and the story is reversed, so read with caution! There are so many descriptions of expressions that it makes me tired just looking at them

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