Mortal: Pick up an Immortal Cauldron at the Beginning

Brainy or not, the plot and concept are still attractive, but the writing style is too cumbersome. Maybe the author pays too much attention to the number of words instead of creating an atmosphere. Often when seeing tension, there are always some cumbersome and meaningless sentences, like a plate of cold water, which affects the sense of reading...

Wonderfully written

This book is well written and worth reading!

It can be seen that the writing is written with care, but the writing style and logic still need to be improved.