Journey to the West: Longevity! This Sun Wukong Is Ridiculously Stable!

It is said to be stable, but the general plot is no different from the original work. The author still cannot jump out of the original plot, and there is not much divergence. It is better to start writing directly from Journey to the West. There is so much foreshadowing that seems to be stable, but in fact it is meaningless to be clever.

I didn't read much, only when Wukong killed the six demon kings and Heaven was about to send troops. I had some ideas, so don't blame me if it's wrong to say it. Thank you. How to say it? It feels like the whole world is in a hurry. First of all, Patriarch Bodhi tried his best to drive Wukong away, but failed to seduce him and arranged for someone to frame him... You are a teacher, why bother to let him go? Tell him directly, "Wukong, you have also learned the Immortal Technique. You will have your own opportunities in the future, but they are not here with me. Go down the mountain." Then disappear behind closed doors, and that's it. If he leaves, your wish will be fulfilled. If he doesn't leave, why don't you drive him away? Do you have to follow the original work and let him make mistakes and drive him away? Has Bodhi read Journey to the West? Secondly, Journey to the West is a matter of Buddhism. It only took Wukong more than a year from the time he left the mountain to practice in the cave. Buddhism was not in a good state yet. The Heavenly Court was so anxious that he jumped up and down, and the Jade Emperor even personally issued an order. A Jade Emperor, the supreme leader of the three realms, only has this little city and means? Is it of great benefit to you to travel eastward for Buddhism? This is a dispute between Buddhism and Taoism, and it is not the period of conferring gods. Whoever dies and is on the list of conferred gods will become your subordinate in heaven. Why are you so excited? Then, the position of the Dragon King and the King of Hell is not that of someone who plans big things. He harasses other people's little monkeys if they don't come to borrow weapons, and he seduces people's soul and is blocked by others' obedient words. Is this what an old guy who has been in charge of the water and the underworld for tens of millions of years should look like? And this Wukong, if you want to be stubborn, then don't make trouble. The Dragon King's matter is considered a private matter between the two parties, and no one takes advantage. Where is the King of Hell? Are you directly resurrected? Resurrected! It is equivalent to the relevant state agencies arresting you, regardless of the reason and purpose, you just run away from it! Regardless of whether you were in trouble before or not, you are in trouble now and you are wanted. How can you still persist? I still think everyone is in a hurry! Let's just say, it's a year in the sky and on earth. Wukong went back to the mountain to practice in seclusion for just over a year. The Jade Emperor drank, watched singing and dancing and never left the banquet. What's the rush? Don't say it's not too late, no matter how late it is, time is wasted. The Five Elements Mountain suppressed Wukong for five or six hundred years. When will Tang Monk come? When will he come out? Then when Tang Monk comes after you suppress him for three to four hundred years, will he be able to come out? Wouldn't that be the same as releasing it? The key is to let Tang Seng save him, not the number of years. This is the world of immortals and Buddhas. We can pass by opening and closing our eyes for decades, so there is no need to rush. In short, I can watch it, but don't think about it, it's average.

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There is no one who can teach in heaven? As soon as the Ten Jue Formation came out, at least 70% of the heaven was exploded.

This is a completely different Journey to the West. Forgive me for not being able to say anything123. All I can say is, shit.

I can't say it's sloppy or steady, I can only say it deviates from the main route, doesn't look good, and deviates from the theme.

First of all, I didn't read the whole story, I only saw Sun Wukong fighting those monsters after he was resurrected from the underworld for the first time. The background says that Monkey King travels through his soul, so how can he relate to a group of monkeys? Are they all relatives? If you want to write about Gou and know the plot, then write about how to hide and seek and hide yourself. Then after flipping through the table of contents, you will go back to the path of learning. What the hell...

Don't read it, believe me, because it's not finished, it's not even finished, because it's over halfway through.

There are too many inconsistencies and the plot is average.