Daming: Save Zhu Xiongying at the Beginning

At the beginning, I could still see Zhu Gaozhi before he saw a doctor! There's chaos behind! The first age doesn't match up, Queen Ma is over 45 years old! Taoist priests are under 20 years old! This grandniece arranged it...! The second entry point is that you should not discuss national policy with Lao Zhu! Talking about economics to an officer who looks like an old farmer, it was the first time I saw the emperor's grandson studying mathematics, and what was the use of studying mathematics? The third one, since it is possible that the emperor's grandson is here! Lao Zhu must be protected by Jin Yiwei! Is it possible for the thug to go in with a knife? The appearance of supporting characters is a bit forced! Maybe after writing the outline, you need to get to know these characters!

Instead of talking about what I think about the text, I will talk about my impressions of the characters. Ma Xing and Ma Ying's portrayal is very good, the plot is reasonable and smooth, the readers are comfortable, and the medical ethics are good. The characters are flesh and blood. In just 61 chapters, they have been vividly portrayed. However, Taoist priests can tell divination and stargazing, so they should be able to see the characters' fate, luck, and facial features, right? This is a small loophole. The author wants to think about how to fill it in and make the plot more reasonable.

The writing by Ma Xing and Ma Ying is very enjoyable, but the others are really frustrating to read. Lao Zhu, who was obviously the most murderous founding emperor, would actually look after this and that (a common problem), and the all-pervasive Jin Yiwei disappeared without a trace at several key points (for example, at the beginning, Lao Zhu told the mountain to be protected, but later there was a plot where gangsters went up the mountain to look for trouble). And if you don't want to admit it, then don't admit it. Every time he finds key information, Lao Zhu will always ask if someone has arranged it so specially. It makes you scratch your head like crazy.

Two things set the standard: "We are royal merchants acknowledged by the emperor himself. Are you a cunning person trying to say that the emperor gave you fake medicine to harm you?" "Have you paid your business tax today?" What hasn't sold yet? It doesn't matter whether you sell it or not, you still have to pay commercial tax" Remember, imperial merchants and commercial taxes would never appear in the Hongwu Dynasty. . .

If you want to make a living from online writing, you have to have some level of proficiency. For this literary foundation, it's better to pick up paper shells and sell them.

It was okay at first. Later, people with disabilities appeared in road construction. A businessman had a hard time with the Duke of China, but he still brought Ru Zhen's personal token. The emperor is not afraid anymore, he is crazy. You were caught by the person in charge while you were repairing the road. Not afraid of civil unrest? If the road is not finished yet, you say you have to hand over the money but not all the money has been spent. The people don't need wages or food. If you go back and do it again, you are not clear-headed and will cause trouble. Duke B and the emperor's grandson really don't have a good relationship.

It's very well written, don't write it again next time

Yo yo yo, it's incredible.

Author, can you be more serious?