One Piece: Starting with Sign-Ins at Impel Down

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The author actually wrote Momonosuke to death, which makes me very happy. I must praise it😎

After watching it for so long, I just want to say: Momonosuke, die well! I hope to work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง to write better works!

First of all, this is a fan novel. The subject matter of signing is good, and the plot progress is okay, but the author should be a writer of fairy novels. There are ten sentences and two classical Chinese proverbs in the article, such as a man's words are difficult to follow, etc., Which affects reading very much. Secondly, the writing style is strong. It's not enough. The quality of the chapters is extremely poor. I don't know if it's the website's problem or the author's. I'm also an old bookworm. I've been insisting on reading the Elephant Lord chapter. To be honest, the plot of the chapter is weak, the characters are insufficient, and the plot design is unreasonable. Even if it's I can't substitute it when I read it, and I can't read it without thinking, because the article is completely different. It's neither a fairy or martial arts in the traditional sense, nor a fan novel. I can't describe this book. It's a failure. It's also my personal problem. I want to download the free chapters. After loading this software, I saw such poisonous articles for the first time. I suggest that friends who read fan fiction should go to paid software to read it, such as a certain hedgehog and other major websites. At least the quality is guaranteed. To be honest, this book made me change my view on this software😂

The main character fights nine admirals, and it's been released on the top live broadcast. Why can a random little person mock him and pretend to be #slapping in the face? Is the Yonko-level combat power so undignified? Why is he just a newcomer so arrogant? I see some people say that you don't need to use your brain to read a cool article. This kind of cool article is completely masochistic, right?

A cool article suitable for idiots to read

I started out as an invincible, but then I became a rookie. It took me a long time to defeat the Yonko's subordinates. Are any of the Yonko's subordinates really better than the generals? I picked a 4 and a 9, I despised him👎

Too bad, the rating is so high, just give it a try! The protagonist has so many bugs and abilities, but he always fights at a 50-50 level with the minions. He is another Kakashi. A battle has to be watered down for several chapters. If he can solve it with one move, he has to fight for several chapters. What is it if it is not water?

I forgot to comment last time, so I hope the author can keep up the good work this time.

I don't know why, but I just find Carmen a little annoying.