The Invincible Urban Overlord

The first part was pretty good, but when the male protagonist and his eldest wife started to quarrel, it felt like someone else had to write it. I won't express any opinions here. Personally, I feel that the treatment of characters has changed since the quarrel and breakup.

This kind of desirable relationship between the male and female protagonists is really enviable. Come on, author. Although you may not be able to see this comment, I hope it can give you a little encouragement.

When the male protagonist and the female protagonist have obtained a marriage certificate, the male protagonist's relationship with another woman is considered an affair within marriage. Instead of criticizing this behavior, the author deliberately exaggerates the male protagonist's inability to control himself. What is even more uncomfortable is that the plot weakens the female protagonist's pain, and even portrays her as an inconsiderate image, making excuses for the male protagonist's cheating. This kind of novel with incorrect views and corrupt ethics seriously affects the reader's experience.

This book seemed to take me back to my middle school days, when I was hiding under the covers in my dormitory and secretly reading with a flashlight. I became addicted to reading and couldn't stop reading. Let me talk about my personal feelings. After reading less than a hundred chapters, I feel that the author has neglected his talents in writing urban novels. This book gave me the feeling that I was used to eating junk food, and you suddenly served me a plate of carefully cooked food. Thanks.

The first part is okay, but when it comes to the quarrel with my wife, it becomes unwatchable. The author, why do you insist on forcing a harem? It affects the overall reading. The second part is too long-winded. It is still readable only to see the quarrel. The second part is too far-fetched.

Things were going well in the past, until I forced a harem and betrayed my wife, my views were completely wrong.

It looks good in front of me, but I don't understand why I have to betray the heroine and give up decisively.

Where the cheating started, you don't have to look further

The more I look at it, the more I pull it.

I just don't know how long it will take for the protagonist's true strength to recover. I'm looking forward to it.