The Rules for Time-Traveling Female Partners to Become Immortals

What a big game of chess. Master, I understand.

The content is not rich and there is no excitement.

It's so unfinished that Zhou Hou, who kept shouting to be killed, didn't show up, and the impostor heroine who came out later was not dealt with. Or maybe the impostor is the future heroine, so it's exactly the same, but didn't the impostor kill a lot of people? Outside the monster forest, the senior sister Fan liked in the early stage died without any explanation. The end is over (it's really hard for people who want to knock Zhang Lin's cp). He was killed by Xuan for no reason and died. His future self appeared for no reason. The fight was not written and it ended with all the immortals dead. Although the front part is quite interesting, the back part is so messed up that you can't understand it and it's unfinished. Don't look, don't look, run away.

The ending is too hasty

I don't know why so few people read it. I think the whole text is quite interesting overall, but the ending is a bit rushed and I didn't understand it.

The front looks okay, but the back is really a mess. The writing style is getting more and more childish. I don't know anything about you writing a hammer-to-immortal novel. The character settings are not clear, and there are a lot of brain-made plots (even the author himself can't write a reason, and then he just makes up some settings randomly, and the people who read it are confused.) The heroine's skill points are full, but her output is worse than that of a kindergarten. How do you think you can continue watching? The writing doesn't keep up with the character setting.

It was written in a messy way, and it ended before I could understand it.

In the end, I didn't even say a word about revenge. Why is the female supporting character so jealous of her?

The plot is confusing, not exciting, and not good to watch

Too extravagant and unclear