After Passing Through the Book, I Kicked the Heroine of Destiny and Activated the Villain System.

There are too many errors and omissions, including plot and description conflicts, typos, etc. There are too many inconsistencies or large and small omissions. As I read, I was distracted by this, and the reading experience was not good. Just to give a few examples: 1. Chapter 13, Destiny Man sent a message to Rou Green Tea (for the first time, online) to tell the story; but when Rou Green Tea received the message, he accepted Destiny Man's offline visit application, and the two of them conspired directly in person. 2. When Destiny Man first appeared on the scene (before he had a relationship with Rou Green Tea), it was already set that he was bound to an A-level mecha girl (let's call her A1), but it was never revealed who this A1 was. By Chapter 28, in the gambling battle between Destiny Man and the protagonist, Destiny Man's A1 mecha was not mentioned at all. Instead, he drove his classmate "Rou Green Tea" who had already recognized the protagonist as the main character. (Although the previous two people conspired, they did not sign a contract). I don't know how to complain about this move. Is there too many flaws in it? Where did Destiny Man's A1 go? Who was he driving before he got on the line with Rou Green Tea? How did Rou Green Tea recognize the owner? The protagonist accepted the slave to work for his opponent in front of the whole school, but no one thought there was a problem and the protagonist accepted it by default? What the hell? ? 3. In Chapter 33, the protagonist's spiritual contract (equivalent to a spouse) and sister "Xingkong" suddenly changed their name to "Master", and directly switched from the title to the behavior to the slave style. What if the protagonist didn't feel calm and completed the switch? ? No, your character and positioning are broken, author! Hey, there are so many problematic places that I have forgotten after reading them. Some have written paragraphs of comments, but there are so many small mistakes that I just can't be bothered to remember them. There are too many.

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