Rebirth of the Urban Immortal King

Not bad, not bad. I feel like I haven't finished it yet. Can I continue writing it?

The ending is too perfunctory

The author is not good at it. Before his rebirth, he had already cultivated to the Immortal King's Great Perfection. After his rebirth, he didn't even make a breakthrough in Hedao and ended it hastily. It's not professional at all. Is this deceiving the readers' feelings?

Very good, worth seeing

It's a waste of time and 80 million years of living on a dog. Women on earth are special and the only ones in their hearts. Any beautiful woman can react and the heroine scenes are not as good as other female supporting characters.

It's so boring. He kills people without being decisive at all. He's a fucking immortal king. Fang Yu, the guy next door, can beat the protagonist.

To be honest, I have read a lot of novels about being reincarnated and traveling back to the city, but there are really not many good ones. You may say that it is normal to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger, but the whole book is full of pretense and being stepped on. It makes me tired to read it. The author of this book is reborn and travels back to the city. It is almost 100 chapters in. I don't see how the author gets rid of his inner demons. He throws his parents into a nursing home and ignores them, and does not contact his younger brother.

In fact, it was okay. At the time, I thought it was average when I looked at the front, so I didn't watch it. But looking back, it was okay. I could read it to kill time. It has a standard flow of writing, and the plot is not too slow. The structure of the world view is explained very clearly at the beginning, and the logic needs to be strengthened step by step. However, looking at the content, I feel that the author has carefully done homework and prepared materials, such as the characteristics of various countries, Japanese shikigami, Indian Shiva, Southeast Asian monks, beautiful God angel priests, British dynasty knights, European vampires, and Greek gods. They are all well-founded quotes from scriptures, and are obviously more real than those authors who make up random things to dig holes for themselves. In this regard, I feel that they are careful. So as a standard cool article, we can't ask for too much. This article actually exceeded expectations. Unfortunately, it can't change the evaluation. I can only comment on it.

Low IQ

It's very beautiful. This is what cultivating immortals looks like. Everything comes first.