The Master Turned into a Loser, and the Three Apprentices Relied on Picking Up

(I don't read many articles, so I just express my personal views. If you have different opinions, you can point them out, but don't criticize me⑉꒦ິ^꒦ິ⑉) It's a pretty good book, suitable for killing time when you're bored. Disadvantages: The villain is a bit one-sided, they are all mocking the protagonist, and the sentences are a bit exaggerated The descriptions of the three apprentices' respective perspectives are a bit sparse. Some history and other things can appear as little as possible (not too much, so it doesn't hinder the viewing experience)˶>𖥦<˶ Advantages: The language is very down-to-earth, the plot is pretty good, and it can be considered a relatively new novel (I haven't read many, so it's hard to compare) Faster👍🏻 Some of the little descriptions are cute, and they better highlight the characteristics of the protagonists. There are many stories about the protagonists, which can interest us (me) Tip: Write more about evil people in different aspects, don't always write about one kind of evil person You can write as much as possible about the warm daily life of master and apprentice, such as the heroine leading the apprentices to practice and so on. Try not to have the male protagonist appear too early, as this will easily mess up the plot. Not only will the relationship between the male and female protagonists not work out, but the plot that happened at that time may also be brushed aside, and the article will easily be abandoned (so is there a male protagonist in this article🤔️? How many male protagonists are there?) In short, this is a very good article, very interesting, suitable for the current wine and food, but not suitable for the main meal for the time being...

Fox Fairy, you can continue writing😊

The author is very efficient

I think it's good to read, but it's a pity that I can't write it down. I really like this book.

It's so funny! More updates from the author!