After Master Dies, I Will Help the Senior Sisters Practice

The writing is good, but the main character's realm needs to be accelerated. It's common for a fairy tale to have more than 100 chapters to build a foundation, and more than 300 chapters to build a golden elixir. Secondly, it would be better to add more interactions and psychological descriptions when the protagonist attacks each heroine.

Thanks a lot.

It's a very good stallion novel. It has a plot and is not procrastinating. It's not bad and worth reading.

I rarely comment, and there is something at the beginning. In the end, the book was so hastily completed that I was completely confused.

I've read a lot of ugly books, but I've only read this one that I can't explain clearly.

Awesome!

I just like this kind of novel, it's good-looking, doesn't drag on, and rushes in at the critical moment! ! !