The Supreme of Ten Thousand Daos

A few more chapters every day. . Thanks

Did that bastard saint of Zhongyuan Sect burp her fart? I didn't see her die.

The middle character will be written incorrectly, there is no emotional scene at all, and there is no heroine to accompany the protagonist. Later in the plot, the foreshadowing written earlier is gradually forgotten.

Messy things:

Some places are messy, names and scenes are confusing, I don't know what to say, the plot is good

Almost all of them are trying to make up the number of words. It's possible to make up the number, but it's too easy. 80% Of one chapter is made up of the number of words.

Whoever sees Fanfan's repeated ink marks will regret it

It's not good-looking at all. From the beginning to the end, everyone is having fun using the male protagonist as a toy. We've had enough fun. Male protagonist, you are the best fool in the world.

This author is a rookie, I guess. He can write 6.7 Chapters just by writing A, B, C, and D. Do you want to make up for the word count or make money? The protagonist was so strong before Chapter 60.70, But after writing Chapter 6.70, The protagonist became even weaker. I was really convinced.

There's no passion, I feel like there's nothing interesting to watch