I Was Pestered by a Snake Spirit at the Beginning, and She Actually Wanted to Force Me to Get Married!

Overall, this book is quite good, with good material selection and a slightly confusing plot. Personally, I feel that the protagonist is a bit weak at the beginning. The scenes of White Snake are somewhat lacking later on. Don't forget the title of your book. It would be better to increase the scenes of White Snake in the future, with less fighting and more scenes with White Snake. It's best for the author to read what he wrote and think about it carefully. The plot is a bit confusing (White Snake's character changes a bit quickly). It's a bit bloody. You can do some daily life with White Snake, fall in love with White Snake, etc. Don't be obsessed with shaping the fighting plot.