Dressed as a Little Zombie and Raped by Nine Crazy Bosses

Well, first of all, there are too many typos and the sentences are not fluent. Secondly, the plot is a bit confusing, and many doubtful points are not explained or not fully explained in the text. Finally, author, some parts of your article are not interesting. Some readers will feel bored after reading it for a while, but your writing style is better than that of ordinary authors. Come on (personal opinion, not for reference)

The article is generally good-looking, but there are too many typos. It's a bit uncomfortable to read, and then the introduction content doesn't match the main text. At the end of the article, I didn't see where the twins were, and my uncle Su Yan couldn't seem to have any feelings for the heroine at all. He felt like a passerby. There was no explanation of whether the dual personality in Qin Lie's body later merged or disappeared or was suppressed. Then I felt that the mute man in the introduction should be Yun Qi, but Yun Qi is not mute and he did not plant the seed in the heroine's body. What kind of spiritual seeds are there, and that ex-husband brother Xie Wei is the one I want to complain about the most. The profile says he is affectionate and has no regrets, and he has no long mouth. After watching his actions, I didn't get the "deep affection and no regrets" and "no long mouth" in him anyway. I just thought that he was a self-righteous and trustworthy man. Although he was sincere towards the heroine at the beginning, time changed his heart and made him blind, haha🙃. Let him lock up with the female partner. (I feel like I have forgotten the introduction when I wrote the article. ○|￣|_, And then, when Yun Qi first came to Yunhai Mental Hospital, wasn't it scary to see the original heroine sitting on the sofa? But then she seemed to be a different person, and she treated him, so I suspect that the heroine's soul has traveled here, but the article does not explain the situation here, and it seems to be vague. In the end, it does not explain how many times the heroine has traveled through the world, or that she is simply a person from this world who left for some reason.

I skipped reading, which chapter are the twins in?

The blanched chicken looks great

It's very interesting. The story behind it is very exciting and there are knives. There may be a few typos, but the novel is also very interesting.

Nice! 😍😍😍

Overall it's pretty good