Forbidden Magic God at the Beginning, My Blue Bar Is Infinitely Long

As a new author, Virgo, this is already very good. There is not much damage to the combat power, which is bearable. The author is also very obedient. However, there are some details that are not handled well. After overcoming them, we can still catch up.

Although the opening plot makes people feel the same, the plot also has ups and downs after that, and the male protagonist is not a virgin, and his IQ is online. It's just that the dialogue between him and those goddesses can be written less in the later stage, it feels like it is not enough. But overall, the novel is still very good.

What I hate the most is that this author writes about patriotism and hatred of foreign countries in a narrow way! Don't write a book with political topics

Can I write cool articles without having to fight to the death or survival all the time? Is there a stronger trick that I don't have to use? I'm really speechless. Such good conditions can't be beat here. You can't beat that. You're writing about joy, not about bitterness.

Too slow

Author, do you live by the sea? 😓

Can

The setting is awesome, but the combat power plot is not up to date, making the writing unhappy.

A few forbidden curses are all the inner dialogue of the goddess of forbidden curses. So much nonsense?

This book is really enough! ! ! ! !