After Her Home Was Confiscated and Exiled, Sa Shuang's Legitimate Daughter Built a Building at the Border!

I read 50 chapters to write about it, and I saw some people saying that the heroine has too many cheats, which is unreasonable. When reading novels, whether it is fantasy, immortality, time travel, rebirth, or metaphysics, which one is reasonable? This isn't really what happened. To see the real thing, go to a history book. What you want to read in a novel is to enjoy it and not feel aggrieved when you read it. Why do you care whether it is reasonable or not? If you think it's unreasonable, you can read abuse stories, which are those who are bullied to death but still can't die. This novel is not suitable for you. Just read the novel with half a brain, not one. Moreover, whoever is good will write it. If someone likes it after writing it, he or she will talk about it to others.

This is the first time I have seen this type of time travel story. The psychological movements of the characters are really delicate and can be brought into the story. There are no spatial powers. They only rely on their own abilities to build infrastructure. The male protagonist is not a particularly awesome being here. It is really great to build a career together.

The plot pace is too fast and there are many unreasonable things. When the male protagonist first meets the female protagonist, he starts to think about that and starts to attack himself. It's a bit baffling, especially when he doesn't know the other person's details. Why is the cold-faced Yama so defensive? The golden finger given by the author to the heroine is too big. The whole family listens to her orders without questioning at all. Even though they dote on her, they are not without brains, and they will not think about whether what the girl who has never left the boudoir is feasible or not. The heroine behaves too casually. She breaks into the station where she is stationed at random. The hero lets the heroine apply medicine to the heroine. The heroine does whatever she wants the next second. This is something that would have happened eight hundred times in ancient times. It feels like I'm reading an outline. The writing style and detail processing are not delicate enough. The story and characters' psychology are too one-sided and fail to stand up. Everyone is just a tool for the heroine to do her bidding and show her "superpowers".

It looked okay at first, but it turned out that the heroine was paired with a woman who sells her body to stutter. Although she is very pitiful, it is just for survival, but it is enough to help her. It must be to set off the halo of the heroine (is it to set off the heroine to redeem women, liberate women, and everyone is equal)? Under the premise that everyone scolds this woman, the heroine's eldest brother When I met this woman, I fell in love with her at first sight and decided not to marry her. In ancient times, I didn't even consider what kind of gossip marrying her would bring to the family. What would happen to the female relatives at home? My sister was not married yet, and my niece was about to be born. That is to say, the heroine has the aura of being a heroine. As soon as she comes to this place, she hooks up with the hero and borrows his manpower and material resources to win the hearts of the people. Otherwise, his family will probably be drowned in saliva.

The author's heroine is from the Northeast. Doesn't a Northeastern person know that the frozen soil layer in Heilongjiang in winter is more than three meters? She digs three feet in the snow with her hands to find coal mines. Three feet! Three feet! Three feet is one meter. Whose coal mine can be dug out in one meter? What's even better is to build a five-story cement building. How to temper steel bars? How important is iron ore in ancient times? Instead of forging armor and weapons, use it to build a house? The emperor still lives in a wooden house there. Author, what are you thinking about? Central heating is also required. How to transport hot water to the fifth floor? My rural bungalow has three self-heating rooms and needs a circulation pump to heat each room. For central heating, a power station must be built to convert thermal energy into kinetic energy. There must also be a cooling tower and a circulation pump station. "Ancient central heating on the fifth floor", what is this! What is this!

Does the author really know "Ning Guta"? If it is really winter and manpower cannot dig the ground, how about building a well in winter? A wooden house? Digging three feet into the ground to find coal. Have you ever thought about how hard it is here in winter? Everything is unreasonable, and every chapter is unbelievable.

The heroine is vulgar, vulgar, unhygienic, and full of foul language. The domineering prince falls in love with me, a beggar. I can't bear to watch it. It's disgusting.

There is no sense of proportion or order.

I was attracted by the introduction. As soon as I got to the third chapter, some people forced the heroine to write a story about surrendering to her because they met for the first time. But I wanted to wait and see later, and found that the family line was written with real feelings, and the love line was blunt in many places. I could see that I was eager to establish the character, but there was too little foreshadowing. It's not easy to write an article.

1. At the beginning, it is said that the heroine's family is from an official family, and they were exiled because of their greed for ink. Presumably, they are also literate and come from a scholarly family. What are the names for the children? They are from Dashan and Xiaochuan. The mother and the second sister-in-law have no names yet. For those who don't know, they think it is a pastoral and rural story. It's so corny. 2. The emotional line is also inexplicable. On the second day after the heroine's family arrived at the exile, the shed collapsed and the sixth prince was buried underneath. The man started blushing and his heartbeat was beating. Me directly? ? ? Has the Sixth Prince not seen a woman for eight hundred years? The heroine's family was exiled to Ning Guta, and they walked all the way in the prison car in the wind and snow. They were so tired. They hadn't taken a shower for a long time. They smelled bad, their cotton-padded jackets were black, and their hair was frizzy after not washing it for a long time, right? You are cold and freezing, your face is purple, and you look like a beggar. At this time, you, the Sixth Prince, are overflowing with love, and you are still trying to conquer yourself. You are really unscrupulous. You have disgusted us readers. Do you understand, author? 2. The heroine is too out-of-touch, and you don't give the heroine any excuses for her behavior. In the past, she was a lady who never went out. How could she know so many rural skills, such as civil engineering, kang and so on? Her family didn't ask or question her. She just did whatever she was told. Is this right? Don't your parents know if your personality has changed? You didn't write this well and didn't connect it well. The original heroine should have died in the prison car. You should have come up with an excuse for the heroine who came here. For example, she died once and received enlightenment from the underworld. Things will appear in her mind. Anyway, you have to find an excuse to rationalize the knowledge and skills that will appear in the future. I've only read dozens of chapters so far, and I'm considering whether to abandon the article, so I'll just make do with it for now.